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flow2crazy 07-24-04 03:16 PM

Deep Down... peep this n lemme know wat u think
 
Chorus x2
Deep down everybody wants 2 cry,
Sometimes every person wants 2 die,
U can pray all u want but god wont reply,
Ur actions are all that matter... so u gotta fly high,

Verse 1
My mans that was locked up just got out,
But we all know hes gonna go back 2 his old route,
He served 15 for a drive by,
Got lucky... to bad he lost his right eye,
Bullet grazed him but it still didnt faze him,
Calls it his trademark... i dont know what he was thinkin,
This boy shot a narc over on the corner at the clark,
Whyd he do it... the nigga owed him 50 dollars,
Now hes got community service... 50 hours,
He said that it wasnt a crime compared to the 2 towers,
He shoulda thought before his action,
Serving time was the reaction,

Chorus x2

Verse 2
The little girl i grew up watchin aint so lil no more,
To bad she turned 17 and now shes a fuckin whore,
Sells herself for cheap thrills,
Prolly got 3 different STDs... but its the only way she can pay the bills,
Her kids pops wont send her child support,
She couldnt afford a lawyer so she didnt take him to court,
Family rejected her, no one respected her,
Now the gang is protecting her,
But with the constant shootings how long will she live,
Her tanks runnin on empty... how much can she give,
Her daughter asks her where she goes at night,
But she cant exactly say some mommys are hoes at night,

Chorus x2

Verse 3
The 3 year old on the blocks gone missin,
Cops is lookin everywhere, the dogs sniffin,
No sign of where he might be,
Their lookin everywhere... but things is lookin dreary,
Right now i wish that he could here me,
Cuz i want him to know my eyes r gettin teary,
Maybe he walked away but where would he go,
Check the park... and make sure he didnt jump out the window,
Only car that went past last night was a van,
Just an old piece of shit... bout to kick the can,
Now they thinkin he got kidnapped,
Prayin hes alive... n that he hasnt been capped,
Placin pics of this kid on milk cartons,
Hes on the news...2 weeks later his famiily disheartens,
Gone witout a trace this kids been misplaced,
2 years later now its a cold case,
hes gone so his files have been erased...

Chorus x2

flow2crazy 07-24-04 05:43 PM

uppin for some feed

flow2crazy 07-25-04 12:38 AM

still uppin for some feedback

Country 07-25-04 12:49 AM

nice spit flow...nice structure n concept. 8/10

flow2crazy 07-25-04 11:50 PM

thx still waitin for some more feedback... FEED ME IM HUNGRY lol

Introspect. 07-26-04 05:58 AM

To Simple Use Betta Vocab 5/10

ill bing aka U.G 07-31-04 04:41 AM

my concept is to con every unexepted cyfer you a biter not a writer flows i drop niggas cop jocose stlye hoes flip out wild when i come in devils son's summen me to even the odds when they have words with god all leave slurs weeker then the blecks nigga all i you do to blow is pull triggas

flow2crazy 08-23-04 01:07 PM

wtf^^uppin this oldie


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