Dang these cats are bazaar creators so like tornados
 

Dang these cats are bazaar creators so like tornados
Just a strong windstorm, blend swarm like honey bees
And dummy MC’S can’t trap their rap with their crummy sprees
Rhymes like a hike send cats on long walks after strong talk
Got a Lex chrome to stalk ladies like Mercedes do, at home caulk
My doors, mash bugs they trash rugs crawling got roaches
On my approaches nothing that hot shot won’t stop, broaches
Hang around my neck as bling

um u need 2 work a lil on word play n up ur vocabulary n work on ya multies,punches,n metaphors otha than good 4 a newbie keep postin practice makes perfect im serious peep da post i made called that see if u feel me a lil holla back youngin peace

raw killa it has metaphors don't need punches not a batttle rap anyway thanks for responding