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AutoMATIK™ 07-24-04 07:47 PM

AutoMATIK™ vs Ruffridah187
 
5barz
due 20min after check

i'll drop after you fam ...

Detrimental 07-24-04 07:58 PM

ok i am checkin in so i will drop in a minute good luck

Detrimental 07-24-04 08:15 PM

OK here i go

Droppin incredible blows that shred-your-bull shit flows
So ferocious that they wreck your atrocious rhymes that you call dope
Your rhymes dirty, wasn't you learning when mama told you to wash with soap?
I don't think so, you know that when i drop you don't want any mo'
My rhymes make you have bad times and bring yo' shit down to da flo'
My rhymes so confusing to solve them you'd have to be Indiana Joans
Your rhymes tiny and mine are shiney as if they was chrome
I control you and tell you what to do like you was my ho
You aint my friend or associate, i'll tell you again you are my fo
You couldn't beat me even if you was Bone singin Take Me Home

aight....peace homie and good luck

AutoMATIK™ 07-24-04 08:38 PM

Matik's Style So-Sick i'll 'Slap ya mouth' till i can 'Throw-Spits',Brutaly Bash 'Beers to ya Visions' an tell ya to 'Stay Focused',My 'Charged For demestic Violence' for 'Killin a GOATs-SIN'//1
Imma 'Elevate ya Job' as the only 'Way you'll Work-Up',Connect ya 'Jaw to ya sholders' an -Hunched', cleave ya 'Wordsuz i'll 'Kill u in action' like 'Obserd-Stunts!'//2

...Ok Lets go now...

Sad'll 'Slit ya Throat' an 'Stay afew more seconds' just to 'Take-Ya-Soul',You getting 'Fucked By Dafeet' like i 'Rape-With-Toe's',i'de give Ruff 'Fist shaped Pladoe' and he couldn't find 'Hit To Make-A-Mold'//3
Putta 'Steak through ya heart' to put ya 'Heart-in-Beef',Then give it 'Two To Three Shots' ta watch 'Wack Start-To-Leak!!!', an my 'Fist like Burnin Lighters' the way i'll 'Scar-Wit-Heat!!'//4
punch Scar ya Cheek,no Hard Technieques Thats why you 'Soft' when i Attack wit 'Broken-Heart-Wounds',you 'Thought u had a master peice' but i made a 'Smoke-Of-Art-Fumes!'//5


haha,i tried somethin different all the barz are madd stretched and this whole verse is just like a threat.
hopefully ya'll feel it


Good Battles
Yours Truly ...

AutoMATIK™ 07-24-04 09:08 PM

uppin for some votes/criticism ...

Justify 07-24-04 09:15 PM

Auto-Didnt like that style...stick to wat ya do good playa...but good punches, multis n wordplay, i liked it dude..just not the style

Ruffridah-Way to much self glorification to be considered a drop, you conceited little punk, you were too busy talkin bout yourself to hit with anything hard

V/Auto, but like i said...lose that style...quick

Desipher 07-24-04 09:16 PM

vote on da prodigy vs exit wounds an i'll return the favor

AutoMATIK™ 07-24-04 09:17 PM

no doubt ... uppin ...

raw killa 07-24-04 09:23 PM

im wit justify on dis one ruffridah u cool peoples but sounded like u were more glorifyin urself n stead of dissin ato n ato yo shit had sum hot multis n puches good wordplay n flow period u got mine ato holla

schema 07-24-04 09:47 PM

Ruffridah187

Droppin incredible blows that shred-your-bull shit flows
So ferocious that they wreck your atrocious rhymes that you call dope
Your rhymes dirty, wasn't you learning when mama told you to wash with soap?
->>decent opener

I don't think so, you know that when i drop you don't want any mo'
My rhymes make you have bad times and bring yo' shit down to da flo'
->>weak

My rhymes so confusing to solve them you'd have to be Indiana Joans
Your rhymes tiny and mine are shiney as if they was chrome
->>played chrome line

I control you and tell you what to do like you was my ho
You aint my friend or associate, i'll tell you again you are my fo
You couldn't beat me even if you was Bone singin Take Me Home
->>not a very good closer


AutoMATIK™

Matik's Style So-Sick i'll 'Slap ya mouth' till i can 'Throw-Spits',Brutaly Bash 'Beers to ya Visions' an tell ya to 'Stay Focused',My 'Charged For demestic Violence' for 'Killin a GOATs-SIN'//1
->>what does killin a goats sin mean?

Imma 'Elevate ya Job' as the only 'Way you'll Work-Up',Connect ya 'Jaw to ya sholders' an -Hunched', cleave ya 'Wordsuz i'll 'Kill u in action' like 'Obserd-Stunts!'//2
->>decent

...Ok Lets go now...

Sad'll 'Slit ya Throat' an 'Stay afew more seconds' just to 'Take-Ya-Soul',You getting 'Fucked By Dafeet' like i 'Rape-With-Toe's',i'de give Ruff 'Fist shaped Pladoe' and he couldn't find 'Hit To Make-A-Mold'//3
->>first part was cool but the second half fell off

Putta 'Steak through ya heart' to put ya 'Heart-in-Beef',Then give it 'Two To Three Shots' ta watch 'Wack Start-To-Leak!!!', an my 'Fist like Burnin Lighters' the way i'll 'Scar-Wit-Heat!!'//4
->>pretty cool

punch Scar ya Cheek,no Hard Technieques Thats why you 'Soft' when i Attack wit 'Broken-Heart-Wounds',you 'Thought u had a master peice' but i made a 'Smoke-Of-Art-Fumes!'//5
->>decent


Automatik took this...even though it was stretched as fuck there was still something hot in each line. Im not really a fan of the stretched-to-hell style youre probably better off without it.

Ruffridah your verse was decent but it didnt really come with anything new. Ive heard all that shit before. It was an ok verse though.

v/Automatik

Abraxas 07-24-04 10:12 PM

Automatik: Yuo're good man you got nice personals and punches good wordplay and structurei liked the last bar the most, pretty good and decent lines dropped

RuffRyhdah: First bar was very good but the rest sort of threw your chance of winning out, some lines were weak and others were'nt very good

V/goes to Automatik
Man automatik you owe two of my battles some vote i voted on 2 of your battles and yet you didn't return the favor
PLease do :-) lol

AutoMATIK™ 07-24-04 10:27 PM

^ pm me the links ... uppin for more votes ...

AutoMATIK™ 07-25-04 09:55 AM

upp this ...

Decree Wun 07-25-04 10:00 AM

auto wrecked this kat easily...this is front lines so fuck an explanation..jus a quick one

auto: your structure was ass but it aint ur usual..ur punches were pretty decent..sick mulit's...good wordplay.....didnt see an ypersonals..good vocab

ruff: too basic..wasnt feelin ur verse that much..only thing ebtter was ur structure..and even that wasnt that good keep working on ur punches and vocabyou'll get there soon fam

vote:auto


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