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Jacket 07-24-04 08:05 PM

Jacket vs. Big Bad Wolf
 
10-16 lines
you got 20 mins to drop once i do

Jacket 07-24-04 08:29 PM

We aint battlin bitched slapped, cuz im hittin you with closed fists.
and You cant even hit a punch cuz i cut your hands fell off your wrists.
Im blowin up in a mist, killin you bitch with every line that I spit.
Im spraying rhymes in shells layin your game in the ditch.
This battle shits a snitch. Im foldin you up like tissue.
U can get the fuck off this site because know one heres gonna miss you.
You’re a disease infectin my section for this election.
Im the primary runner, you’re a faggots reflection.
Like Miller Genuine Draft im keepin it real and smooth.
You could send a pack of wolves and I still wouldn’t move.
you just dont have a clue, ooo the Big Bad "what?'
well im made of bricks motha fucka, so that makes you a Mutt.

Big Bad Wolf 07-24-04 08:58 PM

Dis manz a fag he rubz more ballz than fortune tellerz/
Spittin flamez da boyz jelous,cuz im burnin and scorchin fellaz/
First site of da WOLF youngin came and ran/
Dis jacket is so cheap itz not even name brand/
Nigga is standin big and tall bitch take ya seat/
Cuz if you messin wit me youll be maken blood donationz to concrete/
If ya know watz best, Youd trade dat cheap jacket in for a vest/
Only if ya wanna live an protect ya chest/
Linez is weak an shitty,fake thugz like you get no pity/
Cuz da only time ya get pussy iz when ya pet your kitty/
Dog you think you heavy, if your a beer itz millerz LIGHT/
An da least thing you can do in a battle iz put up a fight/
Forget yo election, fagget your like a dog lovin an ass inspection/
Tired of dis retard/
Im a bulldozer, now do ya think your rock hard

KroNuz 07-24-04 09:11 PM

Jacket--- First Line Was Good Start But Finished Eh, Coulda Formed it Alot Better, Would Have Been Nice, Flow Was Ok, Punches Were Eh... Overal Ok Verse

Big Bad Wolf- Had More Punches That Hit Harder, Flow Was On Point, Structure Was Good, Overal Better Verse Than Jacket

Punches- B B W
Flow- B B W
Creativity- Jacket
Structure- B B W
Personals- Niether
Wordplay- Tie
Vocab- Tie
Multis- Niether
Originality- Tie

Final Vote Big Bad Wolf...

Ok Battle...

Return Favor And Vote Fairly On My Battle....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169

Desipher 07-24-04 09:17 PM

vote on the prodigy vs exit wounds an i'll return the favor

raw killa 07-24-04 09:17 PM

lmmao@big bad wolf dat shit was hilarious jacket ur verse was good but over all flow was weak need 2 work on more personals,metaphors,punches,wordplay,n multies n e ways big bad wolf ur personals were funny(dis guy a comedian) u had nicer punches n wordplay n a couple multies keep droppin sry but wolf get my vote holla

Big Bad Wolf 07-25-04 11:51 AM

Aight thanks playaz i got u, still uppin 4 votez. will return tha favor. Holla

~Hip*Hop*Diva~ 07-25-04 06:05 PM

Both had some parts where it was like WTF?!? You both started off nice, but the ending needed better thought. Overall I think Jacket had it tho, it just caught me more I guess.

Big Bad Wolf 07-25-04 09:02 PM

Still uppin.Drop a link.

Durmil 07-25-04 09:14 PM

overall big bad wolf has this (but the whole Miller light beer part was a feed of his verse i dunno what u set up b4 hand but feeding is bullshit)...i felt his personals more and had a few catchier punches....both ur flows were ight...work on some doper wordplay

V/BBW

plz drop honest votes on this battle:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137383

Big Bad Wolf 07-25-04 10:24 PM

Thankz 4 the vote uppin 4 two more.

Abraxas 07-25-04 10:46 PM

punches goto Big Wolf, flow goes to Big Wolf, the structure goes to BIg wolf overall better verse Big Wolf
Jacket was okay but at leaast he trtied Props for that

Desipher 07-26-04 12:11 AM

ima haveta vote 4 bbw cuz his flow was better an had more personals


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