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DJulien vs J_Trooper
10/12
no crew no d.r no bitein no repostin shit from otha battlez drops due 30 minz after check in im waitin 4 u 2 check in then i will |
yo let me murk dis nigga quick, imma end dis quick
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lol aight check
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fuck u, ill sabotage ur crew, ill force u to post ur bitch ass reply, in da blink of an eye
demolish ur ego, i feed off u, cuz my lyrics is written kick u to da curb, murk a bitch like u from Murder Mitten put u in a coffin dats vacantly occupied, but it doesnt matta ill rupture ur ligaments, ill rip thru da gull bladder call urself j-trooper, remix version of Kit Hoover my lyrics is like a snipa, i put u in a fatal maneuver niggaz in RB think my agenda is soft, but i flipped dat its ironic dat a snitch dat done been capped, chose to b bitchslapped i make u feel nautious, stay cautious, ya crew's failin' bust ur ass leave a few wounds now ya crew bailin' deres no explanation, im elevatin, stop wastin, da situation, dats fadin' ya flyweight rank i waste it dog like da titanic ur ship been sunk u won dis, HA like aston kucher u got PUNK'D.........bitch |
Never will you be tookin in as a Verbally Respected Mc Your Basic i will give you Lasic then tell you 2 come see Me They told you i was the hottest flyweight hit like a Lyrical Menace Intertwine your spine like chris reeves leave you brokein and Twisted No time 2 start Hollerin and Hootin wit fake Hooligans.... go by the name Julian told em i suck so im foolin Him like a bloodstain on a white thong watch me ruin em Never will i Respect Lines from "D"... ni99a that rap about bullets and Tek Nines Ya verses level out to the Worstest.. ive heard better lines from Lean Rhymes Physically im to Overbearing..... they stated me u should of never Fought Aim at ya wig till ya "Brain bits" spill on ya lips jus so u can speak ya Thoughts |
bitch i told u 10/12 you went over that i should dq yo soft ass but fuck it
ima let the people vote |
D- Julian...-- Better Than Your Last I Voted n In My Eyes.... Though Your Structure Needs Work, Try To Even Thingz Out And Say What You Gotta But End It In A Diss Or a Punch That Makes im Look Bad.. And You Should Work On Formatting Your Bars For Structure... Flow Was Ok... But Overal Better Than Last Verse But Not Enough To Top Trooper..
Trooper-- Ok Verse... Thong Line Was Good.. Punches Were There, Flow Was Ok.. Structure Is Alright... Overal Ok Verse, Better Than Juliens.. Punches Got Ya My Vote... Vote---- Trooper... Return Favor And Vote Fairly On My Battle.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169 |
D- you were ok...ok flows...didn't like your structure much....your punches wereok but they missed....not enough to top Trooper
Trooper-you hit hard....good punches and structure...nice flow and personals...liked the thong line....lol....over all i give you my vote v/J Trooper |
uppin 4 votes
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Julien-weak battle, soft punches that didnt land, overplayed gun talk..nothin to brag bout
Troop-Hit wit a few hard punches, nice structure n flow, both need to elevate on punches Holla....vote-Troop |
Julien had a good flow but no hard punches thrown. It didn't seem like u were battlin but braggin bout gunz and killin.
Trooper- Was ok had some punches thrown thats not sayin much cuz there wren't really any hard punches in dis one. Came out harrder than Julien tho. Both did aiight all around. My vote goes to Troop |
uppin
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uppin 4 votes people
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Flow:Troop
Structure:Troop Metas:neither Punches:Troop Troop takes it easy DJ. they say practice makes perfect so keep at it Mane check me....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137351 |
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