battle:biggie vs tony
 

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house rules
u spit 1st
verses due by noon tuesday or u disqualify my win



go!

hmph.....tuesday I smell prewritten.................. :nono:

dont hate im tryin to help ya boy out give him time so he dont get ko'd

since i never agree to this let me think about it

since i never agreed i won't get you DQ'ed if you spit frist 10 ta 18 lines and tue tomrow 12h00 tha latest

well im bored screw tha hole you spiten first ill go




This fagget a wanna be G yo what up wit dat Tony Montana
he fagget that love his banana and strutes around wit a bandana
if he really want me to stay in ma place aiight but it will be Merkin
and love to see ya moma at tha Joint when tha bitch is Twerkin
hey that also when she's Working, and ma dick she be Jerkin
now this fagget think hes A tony Montana Fool Get off tha Mic
Sounds lik u a Cowboy,but tha only gun play u get is in counterstrike
yo fool you think i need time, maybe you do! but we aint nuttin alike
i leave fagget like you wit a Tear. im ya biggest Fear, that all i hear
when a bitch ass like you is near. u'll be hiden for a fucken Year
when im done showin ya ma Burtality, and now i'm showin a Fatality
cuz in one swing i'll kill,now he so afraid he sends me his dry cleanin bill
this fool need Half a week to rite, but still his shit ain't thight
i didn't evan agrea to batteling this fucken Fagget
now ma flow will be Ratteling this Fucken Fagget

watch ya fukin mouth
 

yo the way u talk u must really think that your tough
battle you?? nigga you lucky i dont beet you up
in this game of fisticups youll get ya face peeled back
you cant fuk wit a legend really just face facts
ya mom had trouble pushin ya fatass outta the pelvis
now they got me here battlin the hip-hop elvis
you talk shit sayin that i reallly am the one who needs time
maybe if ya spit on tuesday someone would feel ya rhymes
the stuff you say in your raps has no point to it
its like you say you can beat but think different you hipicrate
now i said if u dont spit by tuesday its a fukin dq
your luky i took the time out of my day to even deal with you
now on a scale of 1 to 10 people give me a fukin 11
you didnt stay in yo place now you get a one way trip

the last line is supposed to say

now on a scale of 1 to 10 people give me a fukin 11
you didnt stay in yo place now you get a one way trip to heaven

yoyoyoyo, it is obvious tony won this. Biggie had sum punches but they came weak and he was too repetative. He said faggat and his name 100 times.... Montana came harder and jus made him look stupid. Biggie u fell off on this one....

winner..... tony montana

close battle a mean real close

punch both
personal tony
flow both
style both
opener:tony
closer: tony

vote tony he came a little harder

uppin for some fukin votes

Yo a good battle but i was feelin tony's drop more. Killed em wit da personalz. Big yo shit was aiight.
v/tony
vote me vs. Jacket

Biggie XL's Drop:


This fagget a wanna be G yo what up wit dat Tony Montana
he fagget that love his banana and strutes around wit a bandana
not even considered a punch in my opinion......
and you said faggot twice and if hes gay leave a link because
thats played 2/10
if he really want me to stay in ma place aiight but it will be Merkin
and love to see ya moma at tha Joint when tha bitch is Twerkin
dissing his mother is played aswell.......
and that basically means you didn't diss him....0/10
hey that also when she's Working, and ma dick she be Jerkin
now this fagget think hes A tony Montana Fool Get off tha Mic
3rd time you said faggot and you said tony
montana 2x already....and it didn't rhyme that gives less
points and the punch was madd uncreative and didn't hit
hard at any points 1.5/10
Sounds lik u a Cowboy,but tha only gun play u get is in counterstrike
yo fool you think i need time, maybe you do! but we aint nuttin alike
counterstrike???guess what this is not
counterstrike its rapbattles.com....and that isn't a punch
and the 2nd line was self-glorification and that is played
aswell......3/10
i leave fagget like you wit a Tear. im ya biggest Fear, that all i hear
when a bitch ass like you is near. u'll be hiden for a fucken Year
4th time you said faggot goddamn it annoying.....
soft punch didn't hit hard at all and uncreative......3.5/10
when im done showin ya ma Burtality, and now i'm showin a Fatality
cuz in one swing i'll kill,now he so afraid he sends me his dry cleanin bill
what the fuck????no set up punch and you bragged
about yourself again seriously.....your egos too high up in
battles!!!! 0/10
this fool need Half a week to rite, but still his shit ain't thight
i didn't evan agrea to batteling this fucken Fagget
now ma flow will be Ratteling this Fucken Fagget
wow you said faggot 6 times and rhymed
them as the last word that ain't right......0/10

overall:1.5/10

Tony Montana's Drop:


yo the way u talk u must really think that your tough
battle you?? nigga you lucky i dont beet you up
well....it was a punch didn't hit hard but
whatever none of his did......but how did you manage to
hear him talk in a text battle????4/10
in this game of fisticups youll get ya face peeled back
you cant fuk wit a legend really just face facts
sorry.......2nd line self-glorification........
and it wasn't hard 2/10
ya mom had trouble pushin ya fatass outta the pelvis
now they got me here battlin the hip-hop elvis
reminds me of something..........
weak punch and do you even have proof hes white???????/2/10
you talk shit sayin that i reallly am the one who needs time
maybe if ya spit on tuesday someone would feel ya rhymes
weak but a punch...........4/10
the stuff you say in your raps has no point to it
its like you say you can beat but think different you hipicrate
weak 1/10
now i said if u dont spit by tuesday its a fukin dq
your luky i took the time out of my day to even deal with you
wasn't hard aswell.......................................
.................................................. .0/10
now on a scale of 1 to 10 people give me a fukin 11
you didnt stay in yo place now you get a one way trip
didn't rhyme and I don't consider that a punch 0/10

overall: 3/10 (YOU GET MY VOTE...)

NOTE: i'm now a harsh voter....no hate tho......

i don't really care i didn't evan except so i droped w/e i was kinda lazy

yo not a bad battle but let me break it down

punches/tony
personals/both
structure/tony
metaphors/tony

v/tony overall betta but biggie is gettin there