LyricalOnslaught vs intensify effect *punchline *
 

1 bar,
dont matter if u check-in or not
due in 20 min

no beef we cool its i just forgot about the battle we had
MY FULT KID...

ckeck in you have 20 mins ok and if not the extension is 1 hour so have it in by at least 4 pm if not your D/Q'ed

Your rhymes are slow on penetrating me this guy is a punchline snail.
I’ll hit you way faster than the speed of sending people Internet Email.

Agian Intensity effect fail to show up to thee battle he set it up and stilll didn't post
i need a mod to please close this battle

yo intensify effect are u ever going to drop in our battle

lyrical you dont want beef, trust me - I.E been dope
I'll stab your punchlines and add injury to insults


my fult i kept on forgeting about this battle....

upp'in for votes

OK fine then let the votes come in im going soft on you cuz i realy waanted to battle you let the votes come and please vote on this battle

Vote- Intensify Effect

Reason Why I Didnt Vote L- O- Even Tho L-O's Was Easier To Read, It Was A Played Concept And Didnt Hit Very Hard, And His Second Line Was A Metaphor......

Reason Why I Did Vote I- E- Even Tho Punches Didnt Hit To Hard In This Battle His Was Better, Tho Flow Was Harder To Follow, His Line Was Better And Kinda Witty......

V- I- E

lyrical onslaught wins with better punchline and metaphores intesity took mad long to spit and then spit some bullshit

Uppin 1 on this battle please pll vote and i'll return the favor.

LyricalOnslaught : it was a nice drop 4 sho, except it wasn't a personal... i understand its complicated 2 fom a personal in 1 bar, but in punchline battles u need 2 come EXTRA hard... but its still tight it just sound like a filler...

intensify effect :

"Your rhymes are slow on penetrating me this guy is a punchline snail.
I’ll hit you way faster than the speed of sending people Internet Email"

his verse^

it was all self glory so i didnt like it at all sry...

vote/LyricalOnslaught

yo vote on dis battle
i went against da WORST nigga eva
don't just look at it vote
both of you plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137406

i vote I.E, its hard to develope shit in 1 bar but i think L.O's was off track, more personal punches

i think u quoted the wrong person u got intensify effect : then hes bar
and my bar aint even on there???

i think u ment to vote for me or what clear that up for me??

i did quote da worng person but i voted 4 da right one... thnx 4 clearin dat up tho.... yo can u return da favor even tho i aint vote 4 u