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"My Life"
Its crazy, i think i was dropped to much as a baby... Cuz even if my ma was a 'memory card' she couldnt save me... Maybe, if you listen you will know the life i live... Im only 16 will i make it to have a wife and kids?... I wish for a day i sit and stare down a loaded barrel... Think bout how my life been nothing but coated peril... How would you feel if in yo life there wasnt a father figure... Erase all memory and thoughts..why even bother pictures... I dont wanna be like him but i still seem to possess traits... The paths i choose in life..its hard for me to suppress fates... It was never placed in-me..but some how i confess hate... My money is food,but somehow i cant seem to progress weight... Almost lost my mother to steel..when she was grounded by collosion... Life? Seems like all i think about is my eyes closed like im grounded by vision... Now i feel like Mase cuz sooon my life will be founded my religion... Thats the surrounded decision of death and life ive been pounded to this living... Grippin-this-pain, i wish i could get rid of this anger like slittin-my-veins... Switch the words its like my brain trippin either way im slippin-the-same... Nigga im moving-this-weight righ path or not im choosing-my-fate... Have ya blood-oozing-like-paint,my money false & crooked but im proving its straight... Delusion-i-see, been hooked to I.V.s ICU,illusions-i-might-be... Chasing facing facts today like seclusion-just-bites-me... Growing up not having a pops-or-nothing watch a friend get hit by the cops-who-fronting... Im stoppin for nothing,same niggas today think the glock-make-u-tuff-kid?... Never had to be the one hoppin-n-cuffin, my ma supported my missions... While my dad never gave me gifts..Bia.. aborted-my-wishes... R.I.P. To my Nigga *J-Rizzle*........ |
Nice Shit Man Propz Pc
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Uppin......MORE FEEDBACK..........1
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nice i can relate with dat no pops shit
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damn man dat shit was tight. i liked da internal rhymin u dope man. wanna collab on a song sometime fo open mic?
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A very intracate piece man, I liked it somewhat/
It started off pretty bad but got better/ That memory card shit was corny man/ You had a really nice flow that made you feel the piece though/ Could have had better words and wordplay, but it was good enough/ I would like to see some multis in there to add to your flow on it/ Use more intracate, diverse words than simple words/ But the piece was very nice, and a good theme man/ Keep spittin and keep elevating, I give it a 6/10 man/ |
yo it was tight and nind blowin but u have the same title we have for the same song.
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true respect from my fam to you:
hot verse. deepest lines: Almost lost my mother to steel..when she was grounded by collosion... Life? Seems like all i think about is my eyes closed like im grounded by vision... Now i feel like Mase cuz sooon my life will be founded my religion... Thats the surrounded decision of death and life ive been pounded to this living... lovin it. nice drop man, way to rep BP... go check out ...open mic : endurance, cuz your fam member "femcee" dropped some hot shit with me. |
heres mine
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I'm gonna make you into a shake, After im threw with you, We cruise into a tree, Now im free trying to stay away from the crazy cree, Cuz I wear red dont tell them i spread words about fred, Its just a little tred that scares you in your bed. my freinds led them to my house, I threw them out, later at 12 I screwed um up man i wish i rolled with kurupt. Its for sure i rap damn, go have a knapp, I made you mad, Now lets scrap, It starts with a slap and end with a snap. I clap and laugh, Cuz you need to go have a bath, If you understand my wrath. Its over i made you cry, You ran away shy, I ask my self why, You try to be like that guy. Peace Out
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Yo nigga.....your shit fuckin sucked....fuck outta here....with that wackness in my thread........1
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