MONSOON Vs. J Roc
 

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fuck it heres my verse

i'll easily rip you cause you're weak like one-ply toliet tissue...and slice you into itty bitty pieces smaller than fish food//
you couldn't produce a "tight product" if you "multiplied virgins"...you're just mad at me i'm da one who "pop" your girlfriend//
imma leave your head spinnin worse than a tropical whirlwind...you're full of more shit than da toliet you hurl in//
to me Monsoon is like a dumb jock...i know for you "pain sucks" cause you suck on numb cocks//
you get rolled on more than airplanes on runways...like LL said "you can't touch me" on "any given sunday"//
Monsoon-ya-wack, you're gettin pop worse than bubble wrap...imma leave da spot hotter than a NASA shuttle blast//
imma slap you so hard you'll forever have crooked teeth...and if you were my genetic clone you still wouldn't be as good as me//
i burn brighter than light Magnified
a million times...it's like your verse is covered in novicane, i just don't feel your rhymes//
i possess a brillant mind so my attack is thought out thouroughly...you act like da average bitch so you're just another girl to me//
so after i'm done you need to take a step to da sidelines...and do like you always been doing, just continue to ride mine//

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J GOT STRUCK WITH ABOUT 10 VERSES

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J GOT STRUCK WITH ABOUT 10 VERSES

I payed the money hungry nurses, to keep you meditated with drugs
your peeps in the hospital......... givin me kisses and hugs

while you stuck strung out, layin on your belly with your butt out
its that happy shitt you need to cut out, this cats bugged out

felt ya wrist yea he gone,this ni99az lifeless indeed
hes in the state of mind where he won the fight in his dreams

call it a wrap, cause with this rap, you down for the count
1--5--8 fuk it hes down for this round, fukin wit monsoon youll get slapped wit the crown

rewind: this is what finished this m.c, lets back up to the first round

They say every punch I give it will come back to me
how is that, when im hotter then 2 gay dudes in a sausage factory...


PREVIEWS PREVIEWS READ ALL ABOUT IT !!!
J GOT STRUCK WITH ABOUT 10 VERSES

PREVIEWS PREVIEWS READ ALL ABOUT !!!
J GOT STRUCK WITH ABOUT 10 VERSUS

Well Folks You Know What To Do
Vote

Ill Vote On Your Upcomin Battles
This Battle Was A Battle (between A Journey With Words)
Read And Enjoy

Im Out Oh Yea Shoutouts To Cell Block 13, I Aint Forget About Yall

come on yall lets see some votes dont sleep an props to monsson for showin up

damn i gotta up thyis one to come on yall we need some votes in here

damn still no votes what a man gotta do to get some votes round here shit

holy shit yall be sleepin to much i gotta up this battle almost eryday

i give it to jroc his shit was good except for '' pain sucks' thats why you suck numb cock.numb is the absence of pain you fucking idiot!!!!damn rappers is getting dumber and dumber anyways jroc still gets it with harder punches.moonson was ok but his shit was hard to follow and it rhymed but it was hard to tell it did and his punches were lacking.

jroc had this one becuz he had harder punches and monsoon had terrible punchlines.


Unexplained vote
-Cprogress

yo mann uppin votes
shitt im stil representin, it aint done yet
creative shit, i let you pic this m.c fall

yea uppin for some more votes i want these battles to be done already

J Roc
i'll easily rip you cause you're weak like one-ply toliet tissue...
and slice you into itty bitty pieces smaller than fish food//
first lines played, fish lines blahza
you couldn't produce a "tight product" if you "multiplied virgins"...
you're just mad at me i'm da one who "pop" your girlfriend//
No
imma leave your head spinnin worse than a tropical whirlwind...
you're full of more shit than da toliet you hurl in//
PlaYeD
to me Monsoon is like a dumb jock...
i know for you "pain sucks" cause you suck on numb cocks//
pFFt
you get rolled on more than airplanes on runways...
like LL said "you can't touch me" on "any given sunday"//
'runway' lines ok, 2nd was ugh
Monsoon-ya-wack, you're gettin pop worse than bubble wrap...
imma leave da spot hotter than a NASA shuttle blast//
Nah
imma slap you so hard you'll forever have crooked teeth...
and if you were my genetic clone you still wouldn't be as good as me//
Hoo Hum
i burn brighter than light Magnified a million times...
it's like your verse is covered in novicane, i just don't feel your rhymes//
pLaYeD
i possess a brillant mind so my attack is thought out thouroughly...
you act like da average bitch so you're just another girl to me//
Yeah your cool
so after i'm done you need to take a step to da sidelines...
and do like you always been doing, just continue to ride mine//
Whut eva

Obviously got some talent, BUT 99% of your verse was pLaYeD or indirect(talking bout his girl?c'mon)

Monsoon
I payed the money hungry nurses, to keep you meditated with drugs
your peeps in the hospital......... givin me kisses and hugs
Umm yeah, I'm sure your havin fun
while you stuck strung out, layin on your belly with your butt out
its that happy shitt you need to cut out, this cats bugged out
fiLLeR
felt ya wrist yea he gone,this ni99az lifeless indeed
hes in the state of mind where he won the fight in his dreams
pLaYed
call it a wrap, cause with this rap, you down for the count
1--5--8 fuk it hes down for this round, fukin wit monsoon youll get slapped wit the crown
rewind: this is what finished this m.c, lets back up to the first round
Umm yeah, the crown...
They say every punch I give it will come back to me
how is that, when im hotter then 2 gay dudes in a sausage factory
Now thats jus homo...

Mostly filler, flow was alright... but no punch to be seen

V/J Roc;it's sad... full of pLaYed lines, yet still wins, how?Cause Monsoon didn't take the opportunity handed & dropped some wack shit.

Follow my links, I wasted time on your verses, now waste some time on mine.

uppin this for some more votes
come on yall lets get some votes so this can be over wit

J Roc because he had harder hittin punches wtf , Monsoon had less personals
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