XxXtasy Vs. Sin (punchline)
 

3-4 lines
house rules..
DICK RYDING flames me up....PLEASE PREVENT IT
u go first
gd luck and god bless (ya gon need 'em yo)

dunno why im goin first since it was your callout thread, but whatever... just be quick...

I put an 'X' on my hitlist... im obliged to 'mind my bidness'..but shit..
this necropheliac chicks sick....braggin bout ridin my dead dads dick..
dumb bitch.. ur 2-2, im here 1 less month n im 4-1... your out shun.....
fuck-ya-hun.. you duck-n-run, like excorsise freaks when they see a cream bun..

ok quick shit...:
her Biography: mind ya bizness........;)
shes from: ur dads dick hole..yeah & he be jacking off for me......
my dads dead ^^
her recs 2-2 and shes been here 1 more month then me..
(necropheliacs are people that fuck dead bodies)

u wouldnt bite if you was a pittbull..cos ur spit reflects u..a bursted fool
u'ld end up with a syndrom,as my my spits reach ur eardrum..next u loosing ur hormone
if this nigga was a blunt,i'ld consume him even faster 'fore he thinks to pull a stunt
theres no 2 widout 3...next u see on the screen is "Xtasy wins"..cos unlike u i aint a mutherficking wimp

^^^ they are 4 lines just a lil too long to show up as 4 lines..........

uppin...............thank u

not bad not bad
ok lets get some quick votes on this^^^^

people drop ya links when your done voting..

Ok in my humble opinion Sin got this his punches hit harder and were more on point...i think though both bars were stretched and may need work on them so my suggestion for both is to work on the structure and for xxxtacy work on the punches they were aight but off point.

V/Sin...rtf on ma sig i hate sleepin

sins punches were harder the shortie aint have no real metaphores and her disses seemed forced like she aint write um naturally basically unimpressive battle the both got a good setup but sin was stronger and more personal






vote honestly on the battles i got up with daillest

uppin for votes.....
drop ya links when your done voting...

uppin for more votes
drop links when ya done voting.

Sin
structure is pretty good...flow is on target..u had some multis...wordplay was decent...one of ur punches was played...the other didnt connect...

XxXstasy
structure sucked...ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...no multis...wordplay was ok...none of ur punches connected...

Overall
both had decent wordplay...Sin had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...and he had one more connecting punch...so basing off of that...Sin gets my vote...

VOTE - SIN

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...

both did good and drop some nice shit im pretty sure it wasn't their best but i like sin's vocabulary useage and creativity

to me both were wack.//
ya'll niggas clowns just to put on act