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!RIFF RAFF! vs. MAKU JAIILIIN
10-14 lines
no crew h8r, or dickride votes no biting or recycling must blindspit within an hour of your check in check in |
If You Sick, Im 'Diseased'... Stick Tha Tech Ta Ya Throat And 'Squeeze'
'Please'... This Gangstas As Fake As Shorts That Were Pants... "Cut At Tha Knees"... If You Was A "Repair Man" Ya Fake Ass Still Wouldnt "Pack A Tool" And You Couldnt "Work Bars Of Knowledge" If You "Stripped Ya Way Through School"... Face It, Ya Rhymes Are More Crooked Than The Eye Of An Asian... Funny? Only Time He A "Smart-Ass" Is When He Starts To Shit Equations.. youre pathetic son....you need to take up a new hobbie... and stop recyling ma lines which you have saved on ya c drive floppy... youll probably no show so your whackness we probaly shant see... dont wanna sound big headed but like your sig states im am what you cant be... |
youve 11 minutes............
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wheres your verse.......????????
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i was waiting for ya check in damn it!!!!!!!!!!! check in first
I christen this bitch raps, with a pencil as stiff as, the salt colored chalk, on the sidewalk, that stenciled this riff raff// Every battle’s a lesson// my raps collab with mack and a tek, to batter ya chest in a matter of seconds// Watch as I’m eatin this herb// I’m elitest to your poor talent, so when we meet, it’s like I speak from the burbs*// you’ll go from middle to lightweight//cuz a little of my greats//Could migrate from to ya system, and rip through the liver of lightweights**// …my hot flames are rippin this bastard// I’m hot after death, like it just took Dominoes five minutes to deliver my casket// *riff raff is something like, poor unwanted, peasant type of person. Insignificant type, so it’s just a personal. **Disses on the title he has |
aight uppin this
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shan't be? wow, you could've took time to find a better rhymer with can't be, just on a side note. Regardless of this battle's outcome, never put ''shant'' in ya rhymes kid. Lol, i'm tryna help you out. What happenned is you had what you thought as a nice closer, or nice punchline, that would be the second sentence, you already knew what it was gonna be, you just needed a sentence before it. but don't make a throwaway line before just to make a nice ender, make an ill sentence before it.
you have just been schooled on how to rhyme by an actual emcee. not a 'netcee'. |
I'll christen this bitch raps, with a pencil as stiff as, the salt colored chalk, on the sidewalk, that stenciled this riff raff//
...Every battle’s a lesson// my raps collab with mack and a tek, to batter ya chest in a matter of seconds// Watch as I’m eatin this herb// I’m elitest to your poor talent, so when we meet, it’s like I speak from the burbs*// you’ll go from middle to lightweight//cuz a little of my greats//Could migrate to ya system, and rip through the liver of lightweights**// NIGGA! …my flames are rippin this bastard// I’m hot after death, like it just took Dominoes five minutes to deliver my casket// |
because of the extra word i accidentally put in as well as, the way i didn't format it correctly, it was a little hard to read, so i corrected it.
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Fucking Nectee Trying To School Me.......
Ive This In The Bag.... Fair Enough I Used Shant With Cant But It Was Still A Personal.... You Never Dropped One... And Why Do People Keep Calling Me Nigger Im Fucking White...fucking Idiots...... |
trust me(insert popular white slang, so he understands me) loser, i emcee. Do you go travel cities just to hit up a battle club, and rip on stage, nah minor leagues. Respect someone that truly raps, young man.
son ya self. |
Yo Riff PM me back 'bout u.killers let's get back up and runnin' why the arrogance man
It was a hrad decision but I say riff cuz of his personals return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393 |
Uppin..........
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RIFF: ya rap was nice. came hard, decent flow... bad vocab though... and that structure with a bar then space is noob... not sayin that youre noob, cos clearly u elevated, just ya structure. Ya wordplay was nice man.. props for that.. last two bars were shit though... started strong but fell off by the closer n the bar before it... "shant".. wtf?
macky: aight... well... i was feelin ya flow, i love multis... prolly cos i use em so much, lol.. but yeah.. ya punches werent as good as riffs... like they didnt hit hard.. i KNOW for a fact you could have taken this so easily... always nice to see real mcs round the net... but ya lacked the effort.. with a flow and vocab like yours, you could have come out on top if you tried harder... V/ riff raff... now.. heres the deal... ill poll my vote when you vote on this: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136790 |
Oowww This Was Close...
I Agree With One Man Band Riff's Punches Hit Much Harder Than Macs But Macs Multis Were Tight.... Both You Have Some Serious Talent But As Its Punches That Win Theres Battles My Vote Goes To Riff Vote Riff...just Though |
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