Is He Invincible???????????????????
 

He was a 26 year old man who was an ex-con/
His name is Ron with the signature INVINCIBLE written on his palm/
He's clever, fast, and very strong/
It seem as though the life he live can never go wrong/
I heard he love taking risks that can cause him death/
No fast heart beat, no fearful sweat/
Just calm, not even a gasp for breath/
I heard the crazy things he does is like suicide/
He's full of confidence and pride/
And he always comes out alive/
It's like he's playing with death and he's fighting to survive/
"THOU SHALT NOT DIE". That is his Principle!!/
The question is "IS HE INVINCIBLE"???????/
I heard he smash bricks with his head as if it was fresh bread/
And sleeping on bed of nails and never bled!!/
I heard he bends metal with his hands as if it was a rubber band/
and driving with no hands in a exploding van, Dam!!/
I heard he purposely rode a motor cycle through a burning building/
And cinder blocks and chandeliers falling from the ceiling/
No scratches, bruises, or injuries on his body/
He some how video taped himself and showed it to everybody/
I heard he climbed a very high rocky mountain with no harnessess around his waist/
Each level he rose he always had a change of pace/
He never gotten tired, never lost his grip/
And never fell or slip/
I heard he drove his dirt bike right through a 110mph train without gettin crashed/
Now how the Hell he blast right pass without gettin smashed!!!/
I heard he sniff until he was high/
Drank until he was drunk/
Because he tried to prove to the World that he wasn't a punk/
He did the unexpected, unthinkable thing he never done/
He took the gun and put one bullet in a capsule for fun/
He laid on his bed/
And he targeted the gun toward his head/
He closed his eyes and with no hesitation/
He clicked the trigga with no desperation/
BOOM!! The bullet penetrated through his head/
And in a matter of seconds he was dead/
You mistaken DANGER for SAFE and DEATH for LIFE/
Each time you walk it's like a heart getting pierce deeper with a knife!!/

Copyrighted@2003 Feedback Please!!
Written by Lyrical Artist
Living Faith Christian Center
Mic17philly@yahoo.com

LYRICAL ARTIST

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Anyone who read this message, give me ya'll opinions and tell me why ya like it or why ya don't like it....Just speak Truth,,that's all I ask..

Lyrical Artist....PEace

Ya I Liekd It A Lil You Should Do Some Poetic Elevatioon And Then Write More You Also Need Rewording

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Yea, I kinda figure I needed some rewording but anyway thanks for the feedback I appreciate it...Well I got my other joint copyrighted called Pornography and it's crazy, so if ya get a chance check that out and give me some feedback if ya want to...Peace..............Lyrical Artist