white gold
 

i be tha master of cermoneus
harmoneus
muther fuckers cant see us
we the g'est
net
straight cumin up thuggin
luvin
you
and me
peacefully
i be
white gold
life story untold
straight from tha pen 2 tha paper
story sold
now i dont wanna cause controversy
because i no dat every rapper, they thank j.c
but i like to say i did it i got here on my own
no help fom god or jesus shit i was barely grown
an u took away from me wat was most important
blarrin my vision makin it all distorted
i was axin questions getin no replys
unxplainable reasons had me excpecting my demise
despise
me not
fee world am in knot
tangled up twisted an all i got is wat i no an not bin told
dis mo fucker rite here
he be white gold

first off ya structure is terrible////gotta get another style crackin seriously no hate but just tellin you facts....anyways....besides that a eh read....not really my kinda piece just work on your structure,concepts,flow,and vocab...and you'll be aight

Peep my piece

basically i feel da same way u have to get a better structure so that u can make your multi's sound good and just start flowin about something