One Nation
 

One Nation Under God
Part one- The Day everything changed

I remember the anger inside me, and how my pride was humbled
It was Septmember 11th, 2001, the day the Towers tumbled
I remember crying in my hands, "How in Gods Creation"
I watched my TV closely, waiting for Bush's retaliation
Days went by still nothing, is this President not a Man
October 4th, 2001, the day I took matter into my Hands!
Packed my suitcase, grabbed my passport, off to Afghanistan

Part Two -Arrival

My life was usually filled with peace, but now all i know is drama
My first mission to find the Taliban, then Ill surely find Osama
Disguised as a Middle Eastern Woman, my face covered by sheath
I set up camp in a small village, in the LAND THAT EATS NO BEEF
My heart now filled with hate, "Why can I just be more Forgiving"
I met with Abdul the next morning, he deals Arms for a living

Part Three- Hero or Terrorist

I could have waited for Bush to act, or even the United Nations
It's funny what money can buy, I had the Talibans exact location
Three days straight I rode, with just my weapons and a lamp
Finally just over the Horizon, now I can see the Talibans Camp
Just then two men grabbed me, covered my head I couldn't see
I couldnt understand their words, their intentions to rape me
A westerner captured in a land, that America had Forgotten
They uncovered my sheath, and I saw the Devil, it was Bin Laden
I looked deep into his eyes, searching for any bit of compassion
I knew that I was about to die, I felt my whole world crashing
Maybe he would let me live, if he knew the pain my people felt
Just then I remembered the grenade, I had strapped it to my belt
I grabbed the grenade, Hugged Osama, as I heard the voices call
ONE NATION UNDER GOD, INDIVISIBLE, WITH LIBERTY & JUSTICE

FOR ALL!

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this is for feedback, not stupid comments.................

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okay first of all it was a stupid question. secondly i dropped a comment in your open mic to show you what a stupid comment is. third, kid you aint even on my level so beat it.

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if your shit is hot how are they going to be swayed. doesn't anxiety mean nervous, cuz your acting real nervous right now.

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again this all goes back to your stupid original comments. so lets take it to where this began. anyways drop it and get out of here.

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