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Spotlight match-Flash(2-1) vs. Premanition(2-1)
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!! |
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flash ur lame....the whole of rb thinks u 'overated' n plain....
ur big mouth will course u pain..... .....leave u carryin more weight than them girls below ya name.... u hate opposition thats decent....prefer any challenge absent... sdizzle was there to battle....but of a no show u were adament...(link 1) every verse u key bores~me...spend ya whole life tryin to whore~me... complainin be ur life's story...fuck bitchin leave this to the 'jury'...(crews name) bringin fury to flash….in and out, I spit this shit in a dash… cos I worry wackness is contagious n you'll leave me in a rash... wack hoe…ur structure means ur opposite to wot defines flow… jus to let u know…this a rap board not a personal crisis chat show…..(link 2) this guy makes threads with enthusiasm and contention… waits patiently to see his name but neva gets a mention….(check links 3&4) The Crews Name Line Was Right But Now They've Split, But Bare In Mind It Was Right Wen I Posted http://community.rapverse.com/showt...12&page=3&pp=15 - Link 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137700 - Link 2 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=134559 - Link 3 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=134897 - Link 4 please check links |
hahah iight ill have my shit up tonight.....G'luck kid
nice verese |
and the jury is dead so that line is kinda useless:thumbup:
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well everyone knows thats happened after my verse was posted, so don't sway, just post..............
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we split like last week cause they murged wit mosaic and now are textual ill~ness
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Severly Crushin ya Thoughts & Mind Till He Vanish-His-Chest ... Flash "Murder-ya-Soul" Till ya Vanity-Rests
Banish ya Text Till Your Verse Matters Flawed .. Also And i'll Have This Man Splattered-On-A-Board Like Anti-Protests! Premanition Punches Stick with Played-Trends Certainly Sick When i Slave-Friends ... Wont Tame-my-Lens My Optics Slay ya Wrists Once Defeat-At-Hand Flash Beating-ya-Glands .. And i'll End this "Pre-Man" Quick Like Cave-Men! The Wacc Won't View The Risen .. See ya Bars Get Abused In Prison .. Premanition Weak & Futile-When-Spitting So Kid Dont Dispute-this-Rippin When Giants Fall In Cast .. And Flash Ripp Out ya Eyeballs-In-Class Till His "Pupils-Are-Missin"! Flash Scathe This Herb-Specialist ... Burnin Pessimists .. Learn i'm the Best At This ... Catchin ya Words-Envisioned-With-Fists Emcees I'm Pokin So Dont Contest with Villains Or i'll Have "P/Pee-Out-In-Open" Like Perverted-Exhibionist! This Rape is Serious Fastening ya Flow Like Tape On Peroids...Bustin Vets Fuck ya Respect I'll Even Write ya Lines On Card Decks And Flush-ya-Text Ya Thrones Dead .. I'm Put "Combs-on-ya-Head Cuz Your Due For A Brush-With-Death! .. structure stretched as fuck but oh well |
Yea Structure Was Stretched But NiCe Multis No personals really But Nice Drop Flash Pre You had Some Nice Personals Flow was Sick And Nice Drop Severly Crushin ya Thoughts & Mind Till He Vanish-His-Chest ... Flash "Murder-ya-Soul" Till ya Vanity-Rests Banish ya Text Till Your Verse Matters Flawed .. Also And i'll Have This Man Splattered-On-A-Board Like Anti-Protests! Premanition Punches Stick with Played-Trends Certainly Sick When i Slave-Friends ... Wont Tame-my-Lens My Optics Slay ya Wrists Once Defeat-At-Hand Flash Beating-ya-Glands .. And i'll End this "Pre-Man" Quick Like Cave-Men! The Wacc Won't View The Risen .. See ya Bars Get Abused In Prison .. Premanition Weak & Futile-When-Spitting So Kid Dont Dispute-this-Rippin When Giants Fall In Cast .. And Flash Ripp Out ya Eyeballs-In-Class Till His "Pupils-Are-Missin"! Flash Scathe This Herb-Specialist ... Burnin Pessimists .. Learn i'm the Best At This ... Catchin ya Words-Envisioned-With-Fists Emcees I'm Pokin So Dont Contest with Villains Or i'll Have "P/Pee-Out-In-Open" Like Perverted-Exhibionist! This Rape is Serious Fastening ya Flow Like Tape On Peroids...Bustin Vets Fuck ya Respect I'll Even Write ya Lines On Card Decks And Flush-ya-Text Ya Thrones Dead .. I'm Put "Combs-on-ya-Head Cuz Your Due For A Brush-With-Death! .. 8.2/10 Stretched..But The Multis Damn They Was Sick...Had 2 Re-Read flash ur lame....the whole of rb thinks u 'overated' n plain.... ur big mouth will course u pain..... .....leave u carryin more weight than them girls below ya name.... u hate opposition thats decent....prefer any challenge absent... sdizzle was there to battle....but of a no show u were adament...(link 1) every verse u key bores~me...spend ya whole life tryin to whore~me... complainin be ur life's story...fuck bitchin leave this to the 'jury'...(crews name) bringin fury to flash….in and out, I spit this shit in a dash… cos I worry wackness is contagious n you'll leave me in a rash... wack hoe…ur structure means ur opposite to wot defines flow… jus to let u know…this a rap board not a personal crisis chat show…..(link 2) this guy makes threads with enthusiasm and contention… waits patiently to see his name but neva gets a mention….(check links 3&4) 8.1/10 Personals Was Good But He Had You In Punches And Multis.. |
Prem
flash ur lame....the whole of rb thinks u 'overated' n plain.... ur big mouth will course u pain..... .....leave u carryin more weight than them girls below ya name.... u hate opposition thats decent....prefer any challenge absent... sdizzle was there to battle....but of a no show u were adament...(link 1) every verse u key bores~me...spend ya whole life tryin to whore~me... complainin be ur life's story...fuck bitchin leave this to the 'jury'...(crews name) bringin fury to flash….in and out, I spit this shit in a dash… cos I worry wackness is contagious n you'll leave me in a rash... wack hoe…ur structure means ur opposite to wot defines flow… jus to let u know…this a rap board not a personal crisis chat show…..(link 2) this guy makes threads with enthusiasm and contention… waits patiently to see his name but neva gets a mention….(check links 3&4) i would break this shit down line for line but i just did that with the Heavy champ match so here...hmmm you used some personasl and decent punches nice drop.... overall: 8.0 Flash Severly Crushin ya Thoughts & Mind Till He Vanish-His-Chest ... Flash "Murder-ya-Soul" Till ya Vanity-Rests Banish ya Text Till Your Verse Matters Flawed .. Also And i'll Have This Man Splattered-On-A-Board Like Anti-Protests! Premanition Punches Stick with Played-Trends Certainly Sick When i Slave-Friends ... Wont Tame-my-Lens My Optics Slay ya Wrists Once Defeat-At-Hand Flash Beating-ya-Glands .. And i'll End this "Pre-Man" Quick Like Cave-Men! The Wacc Won't View The Risen .. See ya Bars Get Abused In Prison .. Premanition Weak & Futile-When-Spitting So Kid Dont Dispute-this-Rippin When Giants Fall In Cast .. And Flash Ripp Out ya Eyeballs-In-Class Till His "Pupils-Are-Missin"! Flash Scathe This Herb-Specialist ... Burnin Pessimists .. Learn i'm the Best At This ... Catchin ya Words-Envisioned-With-Fists Emcees I'm Pokin So Dont Contest with Villains Or i'll Have "P/Pee-Out-In-Open" Like Perverted-Exhibionist! This Rape is Serious Fastening ya Flow Like Tape On Peroids...Bustin Vets Fuck ya Respect I'll Even Write ya Lines On Card Decks And Flush-ya-Text Ya Thrones Dead .. I'm Put "Combs-on-ya-Head Cuz Your Due For A Brush-With-Death! .. I only saw one personal pretty good punches and you had some multis.. good drop overall:8.1 good battle....props to both close shit though |
Both came decent but flash took this for his multi's they wer strong..
Both were even on punches and flow so flash took it on Multi's.. Vote.:.flash pz. |
both came pretty tight.
Prem, you had some nice punches in there. I was feelin' them. Some hit hard, and some didn't. Your flow was also pretty tight in this verse. Good job. But yea, overall nice verse. Flash, you also had a good verse. You had a hot verse. No punch really hit that weak, so you got the edge in punches. Yo flow was also a little better. So good job overall, Flash edged this one out. V/Flash |
My Optics Slay ya Wrists Once Defeat-At-Hand Flash Beating-ya-Glands .. And i'll End this "Pre-Man" Quick Like Cave-Men!
The Wacc Won't View The Risen .. See ya Bars Get Abused In Prison .. Premanition Weak & Futile-When-Spitting So Kid Dont Dispute-this-Rippin When Giants Fall In Cast .. And Flash Ripp Out ya Eyeballs-In-Class Till His "Pupils-Are-Missin"! ^^^That shit was hott...Flash U definatly took punches...i was likin the multi's and the wordplay/nameplays as well.... I'd give your drop an 8.5/10 wack hoe…ur structure means ur opposite to wot defines flow… jus to let u know…this a rap board not a personal crisis chat show…. this guy makes threads with enthusiasm and contention… waits patiently to see his name but neva gets a mention…. I liked these lines the best from you Prem....You took Personals and Flow...I'd give your drop a 7.7/10 Overall Flash Took This He Came Harder |
thanks for the votes people.....
close this i wun 5-0 |
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