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Flow Intelligent vs. Willy Dexter vs. Cerulean

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
20line max.
REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

Starting it off with flow..

I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws
& its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas
Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet
I feel sorry for you cuz-
RV's his only home... on and off the internet
And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice
For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid
I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady
Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy
Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace
Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face

Next up.. another nobody

Ur a dissappointment queer.. leave this brotha in fear
When u freestyle.. even deaf people cover their ears!
Skinny bastid', they gotta name for pummelin' this prick
Called beating a faggot.. I ain't talkin' a bundle of sticks
Shall I go on? kid, listen to me closely.. ya flow's wrong
Couldn't take a stand.. as the shit I hang my coats on
Man I embarassin' C, my bad I shouldn't of mentioned it
Cuz I dissed C more then that song Eminem did
Aight dawg, I bet ya glad its over finally.. aren't you?
U can't even function right.. exactly like ya heart do

and I'm spent bitches..

You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet
I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet
Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck
Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck

Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars
In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars
Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak
My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak
This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds
Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested
Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock
Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock
Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched
Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek
With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae
Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play
Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping
It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping
Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard
Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts

Oh And Cerulean's A Bitch :thumbup:

~!1!~

Ill judge this by consitency seein as one of u didnt show

I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws
& its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas
good...its direct

Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet
I feel sorry for you cuz-
RV's his only home... on and off the internet
pretty funny.

And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice
For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid
ha nice.

I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady
Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy
decent.

Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace
Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face
werent really feeling.

Next up.. another nobody
^word.

Ur a dissappointment queer.. leave this brotha in fear
When u freestyle.. even deaf people cover their ears!
decent

Skinny bastid', they gotta name for pummelin' this prick
Called beating a faggot.. I ain't talkin' a bundle of sticks
I didnt get that.

Shall I go on? kid, listen to me closely.. ya flow's wrong
Couldn't take a stand.. as the shit I hang my coats on
haha nice.

Man I embarassin' C, my bad I shouldn't of mentioned it
Cuz I dissed C more then that song Eminem did
was ok.

Aight dawg, I bet ya glad its over finally.. aren't you?
U can't even function right.. exactly like ya heart do
Nice line.

Overall you came well & original, pretty witty aswell.

You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet
I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet
basic.

Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck
Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck
this was good. I see what u were trying but nah...

Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars
In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars
seen a line like that before..... in front lines aswell.

Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak
My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak
basic.

This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds
Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested
that was nice.

Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock
Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock
seeeeeeeen this.

Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched
Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek
WACK

With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae
Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play
Nerve lines are played since Canabis wrote one.

Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping
It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping
WACK

Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard
Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts
weak closer.

Seriously u came played & weak. I read thru quikly & was like yeh that was ok but it really wasnt. U had to many played concepts & the star trak, video line are newbie material.

V/Willy

I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws
& its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas
Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet
I feel sorry for you cuz-
RV's his only home... on and off the internet
And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice
For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid
I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady
Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy
Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace
Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face

...You Forced Rhymes....Practice- Fat kid
Structure Wasnt That niCe At One Point But Ok Drop 8.6/10

You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet
I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet
Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck
Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck

..Hott Into..

Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars
In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars
Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak
My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak
This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds
Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested
Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock
Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock
Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched
Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek
With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae
Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play
Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping
It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping
Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard
Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts

..This Was A Sick Drop I Must Say 9/10

Vote..Flow..

Polifick vote don't count after all that shit talk you were doing.. hell no.. and your explanation is one of the worst i've seen.. you said nothing of punches.. you said "sick drop" and forced rhymes.. how can you have forced rhymes? if it rhymes.. then it rhymes and wow @ Flow only having 1 personal.. nice

Because Your Not Known On This Board So I wasnt Going To Go To Original And Search For Shyt Your Not That Important...Im Up 1-0...Because You Didnt Drop Links To Battles You Voted On I Suggest You Start Voting Fast

Actually its 1-0, I'm up.. you only have 4 links and that was a hate vote by Pol like i said.. that kid was even hating on me in the mag..

I Just Checked The Mag I Saw It 1-0 You...Uppin

I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws
& its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas
that really didnt hit to me man sorry..

Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet
I feel sorry for you cuz-
RV's his only home... on and off the internet
kinda seen this comin, it was still nice though
[B]wording was a little off, but not bad

And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice
For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid
think i seen the concept before, so not really feelin
this one either...and he did not force the rhyme here
[B]the rhyme was perfect to me

I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady
Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy
wasnt feelin this one either

Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace
Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face
weak closer, gotta do better next verse

Next up.. another nobody

Ur a dissappointment queer.. leave this brotha in fear
When u freestyle.. even deaf people cover their ears!
got a chuckle... but nothing special

Skinny bastid', they gotta name for pummelin' this prick
Called beating a faggot.. I ain't talkin' a bundle of sticks
nice, someone didnt get this, i dont see how they didnt get it
this was cool..

Shall I go on? kid, listen to me closely.. ya flow's wrong
Couldn't take a stand.. as the shit I hang my coats on
too basic to me, seemed kinda frontlinish

Man I embarassin' C, my bad I shouldn't of mentioned it
Cuz I dissed C more then that song Eminem did
i get it, but didnt really like..

Aight dawg, I bet ya glad its over finally.. aren't you?
U can't even function right.. exactly like ya heart do
another weak closer...

most of your verse was blah, nothing stood out
but we'll see what Flow drops and go from there

You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet
I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet
no punch here, saying he hasnt won a battle is not a diss,
your just simply sayin he hasnt won a battle, ok ...and..

Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck
Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck
too simple, nothing special here

Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars
In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars
nope, thats played has hell, sorry

Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak
My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak
nope, first off, never bold words, we can see them,
second.. you forgot to throw a punch...u are saying u will win
even though your opener was weak..thats not dissin him
if anything its filler, and glorifying yourself, feel me

This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds
Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested
that played too homie, i seen a line like that at least a year ago and it was
played then, sorry dude

Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock
Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock
nope, matter of fact i hated it...wording was horrible
seem to me you couldnt think of anything else to rhyme
so u wrote the first thing that came to mind..didnt like

Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched
Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek
wtf, what are u talking about, what does osama bin laden
have to do with him, i get the punch, but it was a stretch
it didnt connect, and you are slowly digging a deeper hole
for yourself..your setup should have helped your punch more
in this case..i know that osama being in star trek is a slim chance
and u are saying him winning is a slim chance too, right..
well that was a terrible way to throw that punch man

With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae
Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play
played..sorry thats played too...your multis were on pointe
dont get me wrong, but that means nothing if your just going to throw
a played ass punch

Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping
It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping
i actually chuckled...if you would have worded it better...
it would have had more of an impact...other than that
it was the best punch you've thrown

Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard
Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts
once again i liked the multis, but the closer really didnt
do it for me, sorry man
just being honest

ok, its safe to say the Willy gets this with a mediocre verse
at best..
Flow really didnt show me much...he came played for the most
part...i think he need to continue reading other battles
to find out what is played and whats not
please dont argue with me about my comments. i was just being honest
people critique my shit all the time and i use their criticism to get better
and i hope you do the same

V/Willy Dexter

No Doubt Mr W Rite... I Had 3 Or 4 Other Battles To Write For In 1 Hour So I Was Just Writing WHatever Came To Me Uppin For Votes

2-0 W.D

YO this battle was decent, hStarting it off with flow..

I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws
& its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas
blah..........
Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet
I feel sorry for you cuz-
RV's his only home... on and off the internet
not hard hitting
And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice
For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid
weak
I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady
Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy
weak
Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace
Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face
weak closer

You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet
I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet
weak opener
Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck
Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck
decent wordplay nice punch

Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars
In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars
not good
Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak

My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak
okay punch
This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds
Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested
nice punch
Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock
Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock
played
Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched
Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek
not funny
With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae
Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play
nice punch,
Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping
It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping
decent punch
Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard
Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts
weak closer

Ive seen much better verses from flow, but this one goes to flow for better punches. Willy didnt really bring anything hard in his personals or punches.

votes-flow