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D.A. 07-27-04 12:41 AM

Freestylin
 
You illeterate fuck you wack with verbs and the disperse of words/
I coulda wrote and spit ya verse and you still couldnt recite what ya heard/
I grip mics, rip tight, destroy this lil tike for tryin to put up a fight/
Despite the hype this d*ike couldnt "split the standing" even at night/
You shoulda quit this bout, cause like in WWE theres "No Way Out"/
With out the doubt I'm beatin this "spouse", cause bitch... this my house/
You could neva "link" ya spits, cause the shits I flip are leavin you all "blood and crypt"/
With words this quick, I'ma leave you split like simease twins who juss came out from unda the slit/
So the next time you gonna disrespect, step and threat to a "deadly" lyrical vet/
Up ya vocab and text cause you juss got "wrecked" like "Tricks" account and checks/

raw killa 07-27-04 01:48 AM

lol i see u pretty good not a real newbie how lon gu been writin? nice post keep droppin
8/10 peace out homie

intensify effect 07-27-04 03:30 PM

hot drop
nice flow nice punches N hits and all around tight as hell.......

8.5 outta 10

intensify effect 07-27-04 03:31 PM

can u return the favor of droping some feed back on my drop forgotten flow pt2

intensify effect 07-27-04 03:31 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137793

here is the link of u dont see it.........


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