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DV8 Vs. 6-50
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house rules 3-0 is ko 10-16 lines max u spit first spit due 30 min afta check in check in now |
ha,ya using a alias...??ya not a newbie......fuck it im checkin in......
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wtf???alias???wtf???
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aight sorry dawg i'll sapit in like 3 min aight....i was busy..
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sorry dawg,,jus spit tonight
this cat sports more~stretch’d lines~than a pregnant grandma, useless like a ~lynched mind~or a women with a sewed vagina, you jus a bubble gum ‘wrapper’ stuck ta anothers sole like ‘chingy’, getting stepped n’picked on’cause real lyricists don’t take U seriously, your jus a~try hard on this art~ya’d have better luck written in da dark, here borrow this line~for a spark~its my worst shit,it’ll be ya very best start, ya jus a ~post failure~I consecutively spit my verse in ~post modern~, my threads are~most original~while u’re a print getting pressed wit a burn, I’ve stated my iq was’nt a number but a sound,im da meanest genius, 650 could’nt ‘cum’~a-head~if ya grabbed da~nob of my big penis~.. |
Ayo,there Ain't No Feeding Of My Verse In This Battle "right"cause That Shits Wack.........
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first of all...im a guy..ight???
imma go easy on u...also..i know i ain't a newb...like i sed...im a lil rusty cuz i haven't spit or rhymed at all for 3 months straight..ight??here i go... shut up!!you ain't a emcee, cuz u talk more like da innocent// na fuck dat, i can't understand you, u sound more like a imagrant// right at dis very moment i wonder why u wasted my time??// Cuz i wasted my lines on a nigga dat cant' even rhyme// Shyt!I'd might as well use my rhymes on someone dats mute// Cuz literally, after hearin ur rhymes, they sound iller then you// Fuck!!!jst leave da RB, cuz u nothin more den jst dirt// If you were, u'd be sold at a one dollar store cuz dats all u really worth// uppin votes |
umm,ok dude i never implied you were a chick in my verse,i was compairin your lines ta stretch marks...and your uselessness ta a chick with a sewed up pussy....
ayo,uppin for votes |
it goes to 650 cuz dv8 only rhmymed in 2 bars and his only hot bar was the 1st one and that aint rhmyme.i liked 650 verse but it wasnt hot i cant even remember it 2 seconds later but at least it rhymed that nigga dv8 do rhyme like a immigrant
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i didn't really likes 6-50's
flow dat much so ima give it 2 DV8 cuz his flow had punches dat work n he came alot stronger v/DV8 vote 4 deez batlles amayze vs novakane http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749 2hard2lose http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 peace |
Break Down I
Dv8- Ok Verse, Structure Was Good, Had Some Metaz, Wordplay Was Ok, Punches Were Alright, Overal Ok Verse.... 6-50- Structure Was Good, Punches Didnt Hit Very Hard, Flowed Decent..... No Metaz Wordplay Or Personals.... Break Down II Punches- Dv8 Personals- Niether Flow- 6-50 Wordplay- Dv8 Multis- Niether Metaphors- Dv8 Structure- 6-50 Originality- Dv8 Vocab- 6-50 Final Vote- Dv8 Return Favor And Honest Vote On This: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726 |
uppin for votes,please add them........................
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Yo i gotta give it to DV8 jus cuz he had better punchez and a good flow. 6-50 yo punchez was kinda weak but keep elevatin playa. Anyway Dv8 had dis.
vote honestly http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137788 me vs. ibraheem http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137782 me vs. amayze Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Flow-dv8
Punchez-dv8 WordPlay-dv8 Vocab-dv8 Multis-neither structure 6-50 v/dv8 |
yo ima have to give dis one to DV8 even tho ya flo was kinda off but ya structure was iight. ya closer is wat got me.. that line was better den 650's whole verse
650: ya shyt was iight but ya flo was kinda off n ya structure was kinda screwed but ya punches were hittin, but not hard enuff.. jus keep doin ya thing v/DV8 |
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