SixX vs Complex Illness (Peep dis HOTT!!)
 

iight yo i gave you time drop in 10 mins

house rules son
good luck
~1~

checkin in...

well im droppin...

ayo...
1~kid please, ur shyt is far from complex or ill/
but wen i speak, it makes ya fuckin heart stand still//
2~u dissin in the cyphers, but on tha battleground/
im dodgin ya punches, n im jus playin around//
3~u weak dawg, 4 letter words wont cut it/
tryna rap wen u soundin like a baby Ruben Studdard//
4~Ima end dis shyt quick so u wont embarrass urself/
all ya punches keep sayin is "im bad for ya health"//*
5~im smokin dis herb while actually smokin sum herb/
n bytch, im spittin fire so u bound to git burned//
6~u new up in the shyt wit sum unkown crew/
git all ya bois up in here, i grill dem too//
7~u cant touch me if i were to try-n-git-hit/
got sum banana clips im jus dyin-to-split//
8~im trashin dis wack rapper like no-good leaves/
but my punches leavin u stiffer den Christopher Reeves//

*Complex Illness:u try to act hard when u like dickz ya self
I might not of told u yet but my skillz bad fo ya health

My verse is winning so nigga u need to Read-it
Dont Tell me Good Luck when u really Need-it
Man i forgot that im so sikk why u dont like Chick
You got that in ya name cause u allways come in SixX
Man this is like a war and ur shitz about to Fall
The Best "Shot" u got at me is shootin a Basket-Ball
Can't Beleave u accually tryed to beat me son
Skill Callibur for u iz like from 0-10 u got a 1
4 wins compared to u niggaz thatz a Lot
U Spit that whack shit and thatz all you Got
IM Nice Wit a Mic Divice right Fuckin Ass
Breakin ya bonez and shit nigga leavein ya hole body in a CAst

I say Sixx had it cuz he had better punchez ,flow, and structure. Complex was good too.
Punches-sixx
flow-sixx
structure-sixx
opener-sixx
closer-illness
personalz-illness
v/sixx

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vote honestly on deez battlez

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137788 me vs. ibraheem
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137782 me vs. amayze

Weak battle, simple wordplay and multis/

Flow: Tie
Wordplay: Tie; weak wordplay though
Punches: SixX
Multis: SixX
Structure: Tie
Metas: SixX
Personals: None
Overall: SixX

Vote= SoxX

He had stronger punches, and he had multis to help them/
Also helpin his whole verse out thas all, good battle/
Keep elevating both of ya/

aight...

Six: shit was decent, nuthin hott...

Strong points- rubben studarrd line, had some creativity, and nice structure.

Flaws- dont talk about christopher reeves that way, have some respect.

Complex: verse had some landed punches.

Stong points- you had a few personals, keep that up.

Flaws- too basic, elevate, its ok...im trying to elevate too.

vote: Sixx

return the favor.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

Fuckin Pussy ass Cheater D.A. aNd SixX da FinIsh Same IP Adress how ya feel ya fuckinb Cheatre

I am not the Sixx man, you can even check my e-mail account you dumb bastard/
dont blame shit if you dont kno anything/

yo sixx:overall i think you had da better verse in cludin punches n content,/creativity..
nothin real great in this battle but it was fairly close,complex your verse needed ta have a better ryme scheme n try ta stretch those lines a lil more to get ore complex...alright battle...
vote/sixx
return da favour
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136831
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...059#post1440059

ayo jus cuz im smokin u dont mean shyt son i aint fuckin cheat i was owt all day yesterday n if u wanna be a dick u should be dq'ed for not droppin or checkin in on time

so fuck u!

I say Complex cuz he was more witty wit it. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393

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dick rydin ass vote^^ plz kid get ya self checked theres no competition here i killt him. uppin

i Bust ur ass fuck u nigga u pure ass and u kno it i spit in 2 minutes cause i got Rushed Come see me in a Real battle if it was 10 votes it whould be 10-0 me bitch so goo fuck yaself get a Real person a Vet or somthin to vote i get it bitch 1