Even with an immaculate path
 

Even with an immaculate path
hard to be accurate in math
Can’t rocket and buy hummers
with a pocket full of numbers
Need raw cash even the law asks for money or spend summers
Wheel-less yall feel this?

this was sort with no real punch or noting...
ya flow was decent,
ya lines was preety basic or average

u need to get more creative and have more lines at-less 8 to 10 lines to make it a decent read.....

i give u a 4.0 outta 10

oo can u also drop some feed back on my recent diss to forgotten flow??

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137793

thanks....

are u gonna add more lines to this or nah??