Gunzgalore Vs String!!!
 

12-16 lines
u spit first lets git it crackin

how bout a due in 30 minutes
that spit 1st shit dont be cuttin it

Its on and Poppin
 

The way my rhymes lean & mean u may think they worked out
Proof read ur shit nigga its some things that need 2 b worked out
You a broke peasant nigga with more excuses than fiens
Give me another one and watch how fast I string ur beans
Kidnapp you in broad day and put your strings on a swirl
And leave da feds Clueless like Stacy Dash & dat white girl
Like Marvin Gay said nigga "Lets Get it On"
But u bringin toilet water raps cuzz they been shitted on
My dick like Scope 2 ur bitch-it get in her mouf early
My nickname should be "South" cuzz I treat u so Dirty
Give me a month & I'll be da prince of da rap battles
Then holla back--
Cuzz me & u both know I got this battle rap'd (wrapped)


Holla at cha boi
I'm one hot Free Agent

Ok nigga lets go

hey peeps check my otha battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344

this nigga talk about heat as if he pack one
but the only pistol's he carry around is cap gunzmy flow a bomb and dog u trippin the wire
i'll put black holes in ya head the size of michelin tires
i'll hit in the front, than go for ya sideview
bludgeon u wit bars to knock out ya IQ
im the sickest around, who u sposed to b?
i hope ya kept receipt ya rhymes sound broke to me
homie im good wit the knife n the gats is simple
come against me n we gon clash like cymbals
i'll leave ya rhymes shattered, ya body beat by the door
GUNZ is walkin funny cuz he hang wit guyz GALORE
u betta duck when the gat burst, im the one to clap first
n u betta know im the illest on RAPVERSE
so stop runnin ya mouth like u travel wit gats
like a pack a Reynolds this battles a WRAP :shoot: :shoot: HAAAAA

uppin for da votes n here
come on peeps give us some real votes and advice

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i'm a give it to string i think his opener was good. . .
he had two personals that i thought were impactive. .
i also liked the metaphors of cymbals. . .very nice. . .
and to add to that a killer finish. . . keep it up

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Man im goivin this one to string, I don't know about ya'll but i personally like the fabolous style ryhmes better than that other shit.. Strings punches hit harder and some is Gunz sht was aight too.. But String gets it

Punches: String
Flow: Tie
Personals: String
Wordplay: Tie
Multis: Niether
Metaphors: Gunz
Originality: Gunz
Structure:Tie

Gunz- Verse Was Ok Structure Was Ok, Flow was Ok, More Original in Some Parts...

String- You Punches Hit Harder, And Flow Was Decent, Structure Was Ok, Wordplay Was Ok too...

Final Vote--- String
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this was a pretty close battle, but i think string had more creativity and harder punches....although string basically coppied Gunz closer, his was still better
vote: String

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string had decent punches n personals good flow,i think you took this battle hands down,ya had 1 really stretched line that sucked but overall nice verse...gunzgalore...your verse lack alot"srry dawg"but it was really simple...keep tryin//
VOTE/STRING
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