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MarvolousJ1009 vs Prolicx
verse due at six o clock
crew can vote cuz we in tha same one. no feeding. 10 lines les go. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-31-04 at 05:04 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Prolicx has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 05:05 AM.
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checkin in lets get it goin dunny............................................
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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 05:15 AM.
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should i grab da 380 n creep??,nah i just got new rifles dat da navy released-
how can u play me n speak,battle system changed u gon have like 80 defeats- u only text but me i been workin lately with beats,but be4 u can spray me heat- ima do dis site & "bush" a favor leave u & "bin laden" dead on & arabian beach- dis fagget ass nigga pro live's in da suburb but on here claim dat he's street- gon be a "kid-nappin" im not gon take him my gun just gon put ya "babi da sleep"- i wished dat he not not test,how u get in hwc dunn when u speak nonsense- da "admin" said he was gon bann u cuzz in ya flow and bar's he aint "cprogress"- fagget whut nine's u grip??..should stop rappin cuzz no wun's get dem line's u spit- its like u "lost with medicine" cuzz on here nobody "find's u sick"- |
ok
I 'hang wit bombs', like im hurtin ya typin how i 'strain-ya-palms'... 'Marvolous' wouldn even be here if i didnt 'bang-his-moms'... You cant stop me I 'deflate ya spits', my punches come wit undetected hits... Plus this bitchs 'severed scripts' couldn drop "jaws", if "Spielberg directed it"... I put 'Bronze to Platinum' cuz like dirty rims ya 'Shine-is-lost'... Ill put ice picks through ya eyeballs an turn ya 'mind-to-frost'... Im awesome wit beatingz, an if needed ill come 'gunnin-ya-residents'... But u wont be respected for votes like Females 'runnin-for-president'... Face it, im lethal im like "polite burglars" tha way i "jack" ya "nice"... Ill crack an slice, cuz this pussy aint even frozen durin "Cats on ice"... |
cmon u late man...
anywayz uppin for votes when he drops his verse... |
nigga iz u gon drop ya verse? u already late...
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u aight nigga lol i spit like a half hour b4 u dunny.......can t fukkin type in dat little ass box but uppin 4 votes
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where is ur verse then?
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This was feedback posted for Prolicx
Prolicx had the overall better verse here had good multi's and good worplay i liked the complexity and the structure u had good punches some of them were kinda week but it still got the job done nice use of words and complexity |
Voted For: Prolicx
Battle Verse 1 structure is good...flow is on target...tight multis...tight wordplay...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... Battle Verse 2 structure is ok...some of ur lines are stretched though...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had nice multis...good wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall both had good multis...both had good wordplay...neither had good personals...Battle Verse 1 had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more connecting punches... Please return the favor with an honest vote on this battle- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172 Thanx. |
Arright on flow and structure I give this to Prolicx- he had that-- However Marvolous had crazy use of multies, and a couple of his lines had me rolling... You both used alot of wordplay in your verses, I liked both of em, but I hated Marvolous' closer-- I think in terms of punches Marvolous had the more humerous punches- both were strong though. Very close battle--- but
Vote - Prolicx for being more consistent - I think if Marv's closer was as ill as the rest of the verse I would be voting for him. |
Voted For: Prolicx
i give my vote 2 PROLICX i felt his flow alil better his punches hit alil harder 2 v/PROLICX vote 4 diss battle amayze vs novakane http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136749 |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Prolicx- Decent Verse Flow Was Ok, Wordplay Was Played In Some Parts. Structure Was Good Marvolous- Verse Was Ok, Some Punches Here And There, Your Verse Was More Original, Tho Leave That Street Shit Out..... Punches- Marv Personals- Niether Flow- Tie Multis- Prolixc Wordplay- Tie Metaphors- Tie Structure- Prolixc Originality- Marv Final Vote- Marv.. Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
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