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C_R_E_A_M vs dysphoria
Battle Rules:
6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-31-04 at 12:41 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
C_R_E_A_M has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 12:42 PM.
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im 0ut ta smash and put u on a stretcher
right after i sink 12 inya chest ta prove im better pay attention,and watch me merk at will and leave u crushed up like prozac pills i know u lack skillz,cuz ur new ta this shit and like bein new ta da hood,son i'll prove u bitch imma do it quick,so watch how i do it sick he gone be a no show..just say imma mute dis prick its been a while since i typed a verse i shouldve mic'd it first.... nah i'll let u go last cuz ya rhymes is worse ...........done |
aiiiiiight hommie i'm in ... check ... spitten first just liek you wanted .. peace
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dysphoria has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 03:03 PM.
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Look at this kid ... name'z CREAM ... like what that suppozed to mean ?
Man I uze your rhyme'z for hand SOAP cauze they look so clean I'll take out a piece of ma brain and give it to CREAM cauze thats the only way he'll get a PIECE of mind ... that ain't wack Ma rhyme'z poizoness like alcohol ... but I not only FUCK UP the liver Cauze when I'm done with you ... you gonna be wakin' up in the nearst river I'm seein' through your garbage like I waz a doctor usin' an x - ray You couldn't sell your rhyme'z ... even if you waz givin' em away on e - bay ! Couldn't give you ROOM FOR IMPROVEMENT if I gave ya a free house When I blow up ... I'll be EATIN' off the silver platter while this CAT huntin' for a MOUSE ! When you finally COME in this battle ... it'll be in a LONG BLACK CADDI Cauze I killed you before you even posted ... I'm punishin' you like I waz your DADDY ! |
shit hommie didn't post in here i posted that as a reply 3 minutes left man ..
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Voted For: C_R_E_A_M
You get my vote for posting a verse. VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 1 |
Shit, wtf?...this ones all messed up....
C_R_E_A_M still gets my vote, but ill break it down more i guess... C_R_E_A_M structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... dysphoria structure isnt very good...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchnes...u had some good multis...wordplay was good...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall neither had good presonals...both had some multis...both had good wordplay...C_R_E_A_M had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more connecting punches....so basing off of that...C_R_E_A_M gets my vote... VOTE - C_R_E_A_M Please return the favor with an honest vote on this battle - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=137919 |
Voted For: C_R_E_A_M
Simply cuz I don't see no verse #2 mine got 2 verses http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399 |
i believe i have a verse there ... i dunno if y'all gone blind or something .. or is this just a crew vote !!
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what d0 u mean u d0nt see a 2nd verse?? maan i dont get dis v0ten shyt...b0th verses are up...s0 peeps needa v0te right |
This was feedback posted for C_R_E_A_M
Lol well yah fucked up cuz dysphoria or diahriaa or whatever posted wit 3 min left and it wasnt even a verse lol......
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0hh....well can u atleast drop a v0te in herre since u ckame in y0
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where the votes at ! don't sleep people .. uppin uppin ... c'mon y'all been for waitin for days ...................
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