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phatinum 07-29-04 10:13 AM

phatinum vs Big Bad Wolf
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 10:13 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 07-29-04 10:14 AM

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 10:14 AM.

System 07-29-04 10:16 AM

Big Bad Wolf has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 10:16 AM.

phatinum 07-29-04 10:26 AM

yo you call yourself a thug but u been stepped on more times then a rug
my lyrics dont come cheep i wait for your throat to bleed
yea im a greanade i need a hand throw me a spade
i play blackjack till ya girl gets played
i lost my battles yesterday on rapbattles
but im comin threw wid this next style of rap
you couldnt spit even if i ran a lap
i connect with my lyrics as if i just rite it
you couldnt rap to save your life nigga i just stole your wife
im a backstabber watch out i gotta knife and wats your name
huff and puff you aint no wolf you couldnt even put down bricks i advise your ass to go home and think ill step on your ass till you turn to gas make the particles explode on the road like need for speed now im leavin this battle you betta check how you fuck ya mum wid greed

Big Bad Wolf 07-29-04 10:32 AM

A wooden bat 2 splinta ya skull or nock it out da park
Bitch yousa pussy, u meow instead of bark
Tha only "hood" u seen was on da back of ya sweater
Noob you can elevate all you want an ill still be better
You use viagra 4 ya chest 2 make ya body hard
But bitch you soft a butter knife could make ya body scarred
You only got the 1st part of ya name right, fat
U too big 2 get play, the only pussy you had was ya cat
Battlin me this bitch iz goin through his worst painz
Blood ya shirt stained, now dis bitch is seekin da first aid

uppin 4 votez on dis

Big Bad Wolf 07-29-04 11:47 AM

Still uppin dont sleep on it. Ill drop an hontest vote on ya battlez if ya leave a link.

KroNuz 07-29-04 11:57 AM

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

Voteing for Big Bad Wolf, Punches Werent Verse Strong On Either Side But Big Bad Gets It for Better Flow, Structure Was Better And Had Harder Hitting Punches....

Phantium- Thats Good, You Fixed Your Structure Its Not The Best But Its Alot Better Than What It Was, Your Flow Was Ok.. And Punches Didnt Hit To Hard, But You Elavating.....

V-Big Bad

KroNuz 07-29-04 11:58 AM

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Big Bad Wolf 07-29-04 01:47 PM

Thanx playa...Still uppin for sum honest votez. Hit it up an ill holla at one of your battlez.

MaNiPuLaTiOn 07-29-04 03:53 PM

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

ok...wolf had beta structure and flow.
other guy work on that....
phant-ur lines didnt rhyme,wolfs did
wolf u had punches....most ok.but i thought the hood/sweater one was funny...if a lil played

overall i hve to go wit wolf..wittier lines,harder punches,beta structure and rhymes.

vote-wolf

Big Bad Wolf 07-29-04 06:34 PM

Aiight still upin 4 votez. Drop a vote an a link.

Big Bad Wolf 07-30-04 01:03 PM

Aiight still upin 4 votez. Drop a vote an a link.

B-MAC 07-30-04 01:18 PM

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

Aight.. This Was a Tight BAttle, For the skill level that you Guys are at.. Phatinum, you had soem good rhyems, But yah punches were very weak, and yah structure was fucked, Your Lines never stopped, it just kept GOing.. yah need to Even out yah bars.. and Work on your wordplay, and Punches..

I rate your Verse at 3/10

Big bad Wolf,

Your structure was aight, and yah Flow worked out, you still didnt really have anygood Punches, or Personals, And i could almost guess what yah next rhyem was going to be.. You gotta be more creative....

I rated yah verse at 5/10


Vote: Big Bad Wolf


Return the Fav's./..

Big Bad Wolf 07-30-04 03:47 PM

Thanx playa i got u....Ay im tryin 2 finish dis off quick so drop a vote an a link so i can hit up your battle Uppin on dis shit.

Myster.E 07-30-04 05:46 PM

Voted For: phatinum

This verse because the other is weak little and repetitive wtf reppitition in dat little verse c'mon man I can tell this Phat's style and u hav improved structure wise u had betta punches than this guy


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