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phatinum vs dysphoria
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-01-04 at 12:45 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 12:46 PM.
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dysphoria has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 12:52 PM.
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nigga i ride till i die i fck you mum till she crys
the pain blood flowin out her pussy sit down rookie i might b new to da game but i still kick ya ass outa the foutune and fame you need to change ya name ill put nine bulletsstraight to ya jaw y u comin bk 4 more u make your self look like a prick 1 pin now u gon sucking dick just get it threw ya head im a boi and your a chick and now im leaving dis battle talking shit bitch |
Intro :
I'm The Type 2 KILL YOU In COURT While You TAKEN' YOUR OATH Creatin' A COLORFUL BIBLE ... Raw Gangsta Pull A 187 On An Airplane AFTER The TAKEOFF So You DEAD ON ARRIVAL !!! The Good Guy Win'z In The End ... Oops I Didn't Mean To Spoil It ... I Battle You Cauze You AINT GOT SHIT Like An EMPTY TOILET !!! You Can't Even HATE Me Cauze You Open Your Mouth While I'm STICKIN THE LOVE IN ... And Your BEATS Couldn't Be Hot If You Kept Your DICK IN THE OVEN !!! Engagement : You FLOW LIKE A PUSSY ... So Amma Have To FUCK WITH YOUR RHYMES ... If You Injected Your CRACK WITH THE FLU ... You Still Couldn't Be SICK WITH YOUR LINES Kid What Made You Think That You Could Beat Me in A Battle Using Your Pop Rhymes ... Your Raps Is Like CRACK Mixed With BABY POWDER ... Dawg They Some SOFT LINES ... I'm Quite Urban ... This Pussy Nigga Better Learn Who He Disturbin' ... PHATINUM Wouldn't Have The BOMB WRAPS (Raps) If He Was ROCKIN LADENS TURBAN ... KO : My Lyrics Are Fists ... The First One Thrown Will Just Graze Your Skin ... The Second Is The PUNCH LINE That Will Engrave Your CHIN !!! PHATINUM Better Get Used To BRAILLE Nigga Cauze My Lyrics RUN YOU BLIND ... You Have Guys JACK OFF On Your Head Just To See What CUMS TO MIND ... OUT |
where the votes at ! don't sleep people .. uppin uppin ... c'mon y'all been for waitin for days ...................
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Voted For: dysphoria
Phatinum- You Need To Start Battleing Weaker Katz, Cuz You Going For Some Good Ones And Thats Not A Good Way To Start Out, Verse Was Simplistic, And Punches Were Basic, Flow Was Decent Tho, And Structure Was Better Dy- Wasnt Feelin Structure Made It Hard to Read.... But.. Punches And Wordplay Were But, Aswell As Metaphors.. Punches- Dy Flow- Phat Wordplay- Dy Meta- Dy Structure- Phat Originality- Dy Final Vote--- Dysphoria Return Favor Wit Honest Vote-- Peep Sigg |
This was feedback posted for dysphoria
No punches at all man. Good flow but i am going to give it too you cause you had some complexity.
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crap this new system messed me up, i thought it was type what you thought about each one. Damn
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Voted For: dysphoria
this verse was better all around n was obviously tried at,good even if ya did have some stretched lines i dint mind considering the content n complexity of them...some original punches n nice wordplay..good job..1st verse dint like it......basic all around srry dawg but ya need ta elevate... |
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Voted For: dysphoria
ok....wtf is phatinum doin besides gettin murked. im sorry dog but even u cant say u won this battle lol he beat u on every level except....shortest verse just elevate n come back stronger v=dysphoria phatinum just take ya L like a man lol n move on return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650 |
thanx y'all for voting .. appreciate all who did .. i guess 3-0 is a KO ? ma first win y'all .. bitches and drinks on me .. returnin the favour peace
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Voted For: dysphoria
dysp you won this straight out no competition phatimum no hate but you do need to elevate dysp your closer was tight ...... phatimun try using lines that rhyme.you may stand a better chance |
Voted For: dysphoria
that should b a dq for 2 many bars but overall it was an aight battle i guess it came down 2 who had better wordplay and the harder punches and that went 2 Dysphoria even tho you went way over 6 bars tho cuz but still you had better wordplay and harder punches in ya verse which is wha got you the win, but work on ya structure |
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