MaNiPuLaTiOn vs graceful flow
 

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Check in by: 07-29-04 at 01:49 PM

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MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 01:20 PM.

sorry...........topic is beauty.....................

graceful flow has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 01:21 PM.

only in the eye of the beholder can true beauty be seen
found in everything from the seas blue to grasses green
the way in which birds sing on a glorious summer morning
to the heart of the holder...even during bitter mourning
oceans of depth,tranquillity..and lush sandy beaches
the way of bloodthirsty feeding..from innanimate tiny leeches
how a bullet fired ruptures skin....and puts end to its prey
u think thats horrific?..its beauty in its own special way
for beauty is not always as is percieved on first thought
its the kind of depth..that cannot be bought or taught..
often people can mistake beauty...for uncompromising lust
its hard to desipher..but try to read deeper you must
open your eyes,all around beauty can be seen in everything
thats not just me talking...thats gods wonderfull thing
as i sit and observe...the ants chatter bellow like people
smiles of children..young, free, and innocently gleefull
now please take a moment to free your mind and rest
explore yourself...you will notice..inner beauty is best

beauty is sumtin dat diss guy lacks~huh~
2 him beauty is lookin like MICHAEL JACKSON
while my beauty is lookin like HALLE BERRY
4 a dude 2 see me in real life my beauty is scary
his is hairier than cuzin~IT~off ADDAMS FAMILY
but im so pretty it against da law 4 ugly ppl. 2 look at me
so unhand me...u buzzardim way 2 beautiful
have all da ladies~like FABOLOUS~talkin 2 me sayin~IM SO INTO U~
its true...cuz beauty is n da eye of da beholder
n beauty of yours attracts~SKUNK~so all u get is~ODOR~
ya girl i hold...luv cuz she is beautiful
if u had BEYONCE'S face glued 2 yours beauty still wouldn't get use 2 u...
lookin at you...make everybody love me more
so pretty...ppl. run 2 me like beach goers run 2 da shore
or 2 da lord 4 prayer...mayb when dey in need
but beauty is wut i got n wut every womens needs
dats y they don't won't u n dey~CUM~2 me
cuz my beauty will garuntee 2 keep em CUMpony
so dey luv me...but hate u...u look like FREDDY KRUGER
while my beauty make em LUV ME BABY like MURPHY LEE when i do her...

erm.................wtf?.that wasnt a topical piece.lol.//////////

uppin

my verse on beauty flips in n out
its still on beauty but wit a crazy twist
its my own creative input

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

v/ manipulation cuz he came harder wit dat shit. Punchez was better. Grace wat wuz up wit dat beauty shit? Any way an ok battle but manipulation had it.
Punchez-manipulation-had more that wuz better and hit hard
Flow-manipulation- both had about the some flow
structure-manipulation- look at it, thatz wat made his flow a lil better
feelin-honestly i was feelin both dropz but umm manipulation was harder off that beauty shit.

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ok.thanx. but voters this woz a TOPICAL battle.

vote on imagery vocab n stuff....

not punches.lol.

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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

both flows was tight, but i feel like manipulation took this one again wit a great flow...graceful flow was hot, more personal, but this isnt any ol battle. the first bar was choppy:
beauty is sumtin dat diss guy lacks~huh~
2 him beauty is lookin like MICHAEL JACKSON : shouldve worded it better
manipulation took it with better flow, stickin to topic

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

ima have to give this to manipulation just bcuz his had better vocab n flowed alot better.
graceful flow's was good to hers was pretty on point i was just feelin maniuplation's a lil more
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874

uppin.............................................
remember dis a topical guys........