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*Skeem* vs Lil-trip
Battle Rules:
3 Bars... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Chea....Le's Go Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-29-04 at 05:39 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
*Skeem* has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 05:10 PM.
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Lil-trip has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 05:35 PM.
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Kid Them Elementary Punches Ya Bringin Ain't Enuff To Knock Out A Second Grader,
All Of Ye Raps Stink To Say The Least|And They End Now|So We Won't Smell Em Later/ Kid Ye Crap At This|Cuz Ya Shyt Ain't Ever Getting Sweet|So I Suggest You Quit The Rap Ye Not Ready To Hang Wit Me Kid, Cuz I'll Put Bullets To Ya Head Like A Wizards Cap / Ye Not Seen Wit The Man|So Like Dykes At Computer Stores|I'm Givin Ya A System Scan/ Ye Punches Ain't Hittin Me Kid|Like Swingers Wit They Eyes Closed|I'm Rapin Ye Text, Ye Compare To A Prostitute|The Way I'm Fuckin You Up Quickly|You'll Neva Get My Respect/ |
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The Second Bar- Wizards And Bullets were The Names Of Washington Teams.. |
Everytime bitches "Scheme" There left with Unrealistic Dreams
Like battlin real G's homie I send bitches for the "Halibut" up Streams! lol homie 3 bars thats as real as your Invisible Avatar Im hittin both your Upper n Pussy "Lips" n aim to leave Sustained Scars! You got a Glass Jaw Hanging over your Chin, how you think you ever had a chance at a win? 6 Commadment which comes after 5 clearly states that lieing is a sin... Hollah...Lil trip |
Voted For: Lil-trip
I was just feelin trip betta skeemz was more elemantry and basic so my vote goes to skeem |
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upping for votes, holla back wit some honest luv n votes, peace
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Voted For: Lil-trip
Vote Goes To Lil Trip.... Better Punches And More Original Concepts.... Some Of Skeems Were Played And Some Punches Werent As Effective As Lil Trips.. Punches- Lil Trip Flow- Tie Wordplay- Tie Metaphors- Skeem Multis- Niether Originality- Lil Structure- Tie Final Vote---- Lil Trip Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
my second bar murdered this kid..lol
0-2 uppin' |
Voted For: Lil-trip
ima go wit TRIP his flow was better SKEEM's was 2 stretched out made it horrible u need 2 elevate v/LIL-TRIP vote 4 deez battles http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138339 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137991 peace |
Voted For: Lil-trip
Nice flow....words, punches, a lil bit of multis, and vocab.....ya shit was nice cuz.....you got my vote Trip...aye, hit up my battle...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137727 |
Voted For: *Skeem*
Punches:Skeem Multi's:Skeem Opener: Skeem Closer:Lil Trip Personals:Lil Trip, I guess Flow: Skeem Structure: Skeem, By a Little Rhyems: Lil Flip Overall Ill'ness(my own Category):Lil Flip Best Lines: Skeem: Ye Compare To A Prostitute|The Way I'm Fuckin You Up Quickly|You'll Neva Get My Respect/ Lil Flip: You got a Glass Jaw Hanging over your Chin, how you think you ever had a chance at a win? 6 Commadment which comes after 5 clearly states that lieing is a sin... Skeems Rated: 6/10 Lil Flip Rated: 5/10 Summary: Skeems had a tight Verse, just gotta work on harder Punches, and better wordplay, and Come up wit some personals Lil Flip: Aight yo, you hade a good verse, but if yah Put a few More bars in there, it would have been alot tighter, and i think you would have taken this battle, Vote: Skeem Good battle Guys Keep it up Return the Fav...... |
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Thats how you lose...you put all your emphesis n best line into one bar...its gotta be consistent...n thats why not one of my bars, but all "3" of em where ontop of yours.. Uppin for votes |
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uppin for votes, lets get some honest feedback n votes
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