BostonLyricist vs Kizza
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines= 3-5 barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

25 min posts to vote

check in by 30 mins after this is posted.
verses due 21 minutes after that.

Minimum posts to vote: 25

Check in by: 07-29-04 at 05:51 PM

Must drop verse in 21 minutes after check in.

BostonLyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 05:24 PM.

Kizza has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 05:25 PM.

kizza from the city tryin to be the local hero
tryin be hot but more like the element used from sub zero//
lyrical creation i connect with his matrix
you cant afford the air 1's so you brought back asics
your a loner ,moms cut the cord while you was incubatin
being born is the last time you saw pussy and you wasnt even penitratin//....

Celt think he hard 'cause he reppin the Bo'
you're dumb irish luck runnin thin in '04
I'll maul you like a bruin ta ruin ya tea party
spit 152 proof bacardi, about to solve
this head's case like the Hardies
Ya like green, think you a leprechaun?
well I'm a bay Giant, jack, chase you
back up 'da bean' stalk, Like Manny, str8 GONE!
wear you out like my red socks
more holes in the flows than hot lava rocks

good luck Bo

nice drop Boston, finally I battle a decent mc who doesnt need to explain his verse and sway votes! uppin dis for votes!!!

bah I screwed up....

last line should read

more holes in ya flows than hot lava rocks

not

more holes in the flows than hot lava rocks

sorry.

yo i forgot 6-10 lines i had some more hot shit but its cool...good shit kizza keep it up

uppin dis for some votes please.

Voted For: Kizza

Good punches and personals, like that boston tea party reference, came harder than Boston with a better structure and flow, my vote to you...return the favor..link i sig.

Voted For: Kizza

Kizza- Good Battle.... Felt The Flow From Yall reen Like Lep' To Str8 Im Gon.. Tight... Also Ok Structure And Personals...

Boston- Ok Verse Nothing Spectacular.. And The Pentration Line Was Is A Played Concept.. Structure Was Better... But punches And Personals Werent So...

Punches- Kiz
Personals- Kiz
Flow- Bl
Wordplay- Bl
Metaphors- Bl
Structure- Bl
Originality- Kizz

Final Vote Kizza

Voted For: BostonLyricist

you punches connected flow was ok but ya content n originality in ya verse was obvious in this battle,some stretched lines thast i dint like but your ryme scheme made up 4 it..nice drop the other guy had 4 more lines n still dint have da same overall effect....i was'nt feelin his entire verse especially the opener...not good considering thats the first thing voters read...no hate jus my opinion ya'll
vote/bl
i dunno if i can put this here??
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uppin for votes!

uppin this for more votes

uppin this for votes, thanks to all who've voted so far!