GEE vs phatinum
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 11:02 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 11:03 PM.

GEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 11:14 PM.

yo i think your brain dead your heads holo your echos so quiet dey dont follow spit lyrics cheep i bet they borrowed if u dnt finsh i stop spittin tomorrow if i colapse ill giv ya da mic in my grave start turnin this nigga on the beach im comin threw like a tidal wave just turn to the next page release my rage locked up in a cage open up the pad lock im bout 2 crck your skull on the block im leavin you stunned while you still in shock

I lyrically diss you, "cap" on you like plastic bottles,
this bitch "poses" with "fakes" more than big tit models.
Target is the face, "punch"lines hit ya well,
and leave ya lips fatter than Dave Chapelles.
I preach my rhymes "loudly", to anybody that loves it,
in the "game", he's "Melo"*, like the Denver Nuggets.
Callin me out..Bitch...you just signed your death sentence.
cuz i'll "rip" you faster than a greedy kid with Christmas presents.
Kill you metaphorically, close this battle like a finished book,
Nobody can feel ya "punches", cuz I diminished ya "hook".
I'm a rebel, my range fa rappin like a female's treble,
I'm like ya "ceiling", cuz I'm always over ya "level".
Kill you with the heat lyrics, inferno blastin at ya like blaze,
roast you and toast you, like an albino under sun rays.
Poppin you like a bag of Lays, lyrical slaugher with one phrase,
water from all the bays, cant amount to all the bullshit you say.
My lines come sick and steadier,"mass" is what you lackin-son,
ta make his bars hard and "heavier", this stupidass tried stickin "phat-in-um."


*Carmelo Anthony, "Melo" = Mellow: quiet, or not active.

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Voted For: GEE

GEE FLOW
GEE PERSONALS BARELY
GEE PUNCHES
GEE FOR BETTER EVERTHING
I REALLY DONT LIKE THIS BITCH GEE BUT I GOTTA VOTE FAIR EVEN THOUGH HE DOESNT VOTE TO GEE

Gee takes this in all catagories, Phatinum your at about my level we should battle, but anyways, this battle was really one sided Gee takes this with better wordplay and better punches. Sorry to say but I think he was just to experienced for ya P, you and me should battle cause our skill level's are the same I think were both newbs.

GEE can you return the favour please the link is in my sig.

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Voted For: GEE

DAmn, GEE your goood i love your drop. Nice personals and pnuches all very hard hitteri also liked your structure and flow it was aswesome. phatinum naw yours was shit, you should have structured it and gave it better flow but yur pnuches were weak anyways

Voted For: GEE

nice verse gee you took this in all cats,you had no real competition,nice wordplay n meta's..i liked da albino line...you came hard da whole way with good vocab..structure was a bit off but i dint find it hurt ya flow that much...phatinum i think ya gotta battle weaker cats n try ta get some format in your verse,don't treat a battle like a freestyle..there alot different..pc
return da vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...784#post1452784

This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

stop coying your ryhms you said that the last battle i went to

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