Lil Fresh-style
 

ayo chek chek

wen i was young bout 12 my block was full of crack whorez//
now iam 16 turnin 17 and now iam high and i jack storez//
not knowin tha consequences..
after ive eatin tha goods police mans threw bak doorz//
lookin out ma window seein black on black warz//
this was a crazy year cuz ma crew rushed some copz//
after that we took they glocks and rushed tha blockz//
that we didnt like..like umm tha West queenz Ckrabz//
had they leader put a glock to his head...He Said...
Crips up fo lyfe..waat u best meen Crabz.//
nana no i didnt (Bang) well now u dead.....
after that nigga was done i layed a bitch//
kicked her our tha crib.. got all ma niggas...
here some bois had beef so we sprayed they whipz//
had a crip made him dis-a-pear...
they like jokah how come u play there trickz//
now he wish-he-here....
cuz iam fuckin bitch..and she good//
ma boi b stuckin a crip..and its all hood//
we commin for u next so get cha 4 leaf glover//
and wen u thinks it done..THIS SHIT AINT OVA//

jus a lil key style

Uppin Feeback

da flow was nmice a couple places where ur structure lacked n u didnt finish rhymin wit wut u started wit but overall good drop holla back kid

I like tha plot..........jess work on yo structure a lil bit.Otherwise keep doin wah chu do