Sinner vs BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 05:32 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 05:42 AM.

k heres mine:

I'm tryin to get to the top, Just wont stop, makin my lyrics, tryin not to die//
i get high, eye for eye, your shy around me, and you try to get in the crazy cree man i dont no why?//.

Yer sly when you come home//
you go in yer bed and cry cuz you got yer ass kicked by that guy//
i ask my self why, you like mary jay bligh//.

One night you went over there and broung the pain//
its not the same you got no aim i dont know yer name eather whata shame you got no game//.

Its for sure the flame got big when you blammed it on me//
thats fuckin lame im gonna get my freind named jermaine//.

Sinner has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 05:48 AM.

my rules were for you to post first????????

Brother serously your verse stinked something missing//
this bitch needs to get a nurse 2 stop his penis shrinking//
What were you thinking when your gettin a serious whipping/
see your verse was unique for herbs who don't know verbs//
learn! stop wasting your time with no money n no dick 2 burn// :thefinger
All them lies of coarse im gonna denie just die n don't testifie//
your rapper couldn't be noticed if this fucker was just magnified//
I thought I said 10 lines what is there somet wrong wid ya mind//
you must think your vanilla ice trying to be white you stupid dike/
your somebody that no one likes thats why you act kool wearin nike//

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This was feedback posted for Sinner
 

This aint your verse.. .lol.... " My Rules Were For YOu To Post First"

of coarse that's my verse I made this up what makes you say that?

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im waitng for votes any one? vote for eather me or him

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upping for votes... lmao at the other battle......

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