!RIFF RAFF! vs phatinum
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 11:16 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 11:17 AM.

!RIFF RAFF! has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 11:17 AM.

yo i think your brain dead instead your head was holo,
i couldnt hear your fckin echos even if this battle finshed tommorow, your lyrics come cheep i bet they borrowed,
ill b turnin in my grave till this is fckin broken up like ya face,
ill slice ya in half till ya body broken, 9 bullets in ya ass you b smokin,now you gotta limp nigga you look like michealjacksons chimp,you betta hand ova the mic while you still gotta chance,im gonna b leavin this battle while i still can run a hundred miles i think you should nigga im straight frm the hood,the only one you got is da one on the back of your coat,im out cause you bout 2 cough up smoke while you got the mic you bout 2 choke.

yo weres ya verse did ya choke or somtink come on im waiting

look you herb you were ment to go first...
but im a drop first anyway coz youll still loose even if you feed from this...

y'all know ive got this battle boxed off like a cubic square
coz this lil bitch phatinum's only 13 with no pubic hair
still gets put on the yellow school bus by his loving mum
saying if im at work when you get back youre tea i'll be in the oven son.
n' when he spits he chokes, its like he's spiiten backwards.
like fat kids with candy he can only rip plastic rappers.
Ah man now your crying, you want me to go get a towel?
If this was a basket ball game, your whole verse had been a foul
Da phatinum's is really jus a mirage in his own persistance
how could I rip him when this kid is an entity non-existant

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

I liked yo start off riff, and you had good stucture also.. the first bar o phatinum, was alright but i didn't realy get it.. I think that riff came a lil bit harder with the personals and punches so i vote for him.. his structure was also better.. V/Riff Raff

return favor with a vote in my thread yo.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136085

aight i didnt see youd dropped......

should of flipped that whack verse...
lines like this....
"while you got the mic you bout 2 choke." ( where the fucks the mic) we typeing you fucking herb

This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

i think riff raff won it to bad i cant vote

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

Punches- Riff Raff
Personals- Riff Raff
Flow- Phat
Wordplay- Riff
Meta- Tie
Multis- Niether
Originality- Tie
Structure Riff Raff

Final Vote-- Riff Raff

Riff Raff Got This For Better Punches, Wordplay And Verse Structure.... Phat Came Ok But Not Hard Enough..

Return Favor With Honest Vote Peep My Sigg

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

riff raff had this one cuz of harder puchlines and betta flow

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

aight thanks guys
uppin this........................

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

Good battle y'all

Platinum.....you had some weak punches but a lot of your verse was just filler. and your structure was bad man...u have to end your lines somewhere, flow was off do to your bad structure, you didn't have any personals art all, you need to elevate but you got potential man u just gotta learn how to do things

Riff....ok I can see that you didn't try in this one but you still took it in my opinion, you had personals they weren't strong but they were funny, nice way to play off his age and inexperience made this a easy win for you, punches were decent, they were hard enuff u didn't need to go all out in this one. flow was solid, and structure was tight, good battle

Aye yo ccould y'all holla back on my battle wit some honest explained votes, appreciate dat
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1451408

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

I liked them both Riff wins cuz he had more punches that were harder hittin. But I have to say Phat has improved immensely keep up the good work there wasn't that much between you. Phat some of your punches were played try to avoid that. Creativity. up your game like your doin. return the fav. Cali wins more punches that were harder hitting and a better structured verse I don't no how it is possible to win wit this little this is a one off Cali I kno you were jus 'doin enuff to win' but this takes da biscuit betta to be certain than cocksure you do kno dat ain't even 6 bars (but jus between me and you) return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043
Lil bing learn to structure your verse learn from Phatinum he used to write like you wit da same type of content but improved after takin a piece of advice from me who learnt from a piece of advice from others your structure looked raped there was one personal I saw and get some punches in fact, go to the tutorial sect. I dare not re-read your verse. like I said return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043