My Turn To Shine - First Drop
 

Yo dat bits highlited relate to songs aite.........


Spitting lyrics so hot like da SUN, I swear I must be da chosen one/
Sent down from GOD, blessed as a child they should call me da GODSUN//
Like bone crusher im never scared, and when I attack you verbally you should beware/
Coz ya gonna get teared leaving you stuck in the lyrical garage getting repaired//
Me and Killa gonna leave ya so stunned ya gonna stop BREATHEing/
Coz we so FABOLOUS throwing more punches than Ali when he use to do boxing//
Fuck wit me I wont hesitate to BUSS MY GUN/
I was born wit a BRAVE HEART that will make you pussys stop bitching and start to Run//
Like in the 100 metres when ya hear dat bang/
You will be making more noise and I’ll have you going faster than a mustang//
PI like tha new WESTSIDE CONNECTION coz we starting up a new GANGSTA NATION/
Having you pussys tryna take me out but I keep coming back in a new Sequel like I was Jason//
You can try and put me in JAIL, but you cant stop me rap coz this is wot I have had assigned/
So back off bitches coz this is jaggy A’s time to SHYNE… :banghead:

uppin for some feed yo....holla..........peace.............

Yo can i get some feed plzzzz.holla.......peace..........

A yo ya shit was OK but i've heard better. I think you need to work on your lyrics cuz some of tha shit you said... just didn't make sense. On a a scale of 1 to 10 I would give that a 7. So yah mean get ya weight up and keep on workin on ya shit 4-reel. A yo fuck it. That shit was garbage on some REAL shit. So if you got a problem with what I said let me know. It's tha boh WestOakLaneKilla so if their a problem go solve that shit. Holla at ya Fuckin Boi. Errly

WTF i aint got a problem wit ya feed it all respected yo aite so peace........and thanxs for da feed k.........peace.....holla........uppin for some more feed........

ayt fuck wut da hata up there said nigga u had a good drop sum good punches n metas keep postin jus fix ur structure up a bit work on multis n keep doin ya thing
return da favor of feedback on post of mine n my crews my life(ruff tuff thug ft.shy n me)&troubled minds(ruff tuff thug ft. me) holla back stay up peace out

Yo aite thanxs,i aint bovered bout him anyway coz i av ad some good feed on otha sites.......aite il repay da favor and yo check my otha drop called perspective influence da got goos multis.....holla....peace........

ayo jaggy u know me lol
thats was a nice drop but i know u can do better homie, keep up ur shit is always nice

wasnt bad, nice rhyme scheme, get some multiez i there...

keep at it...

Yo thanxs Guji and you seem to be on every rap site,lol.........holla......peace and thanxs yo........

That was D-so to be honest. But man, you keep working on your shit and you'll get better, all you need is a little time. But yo, hit this link up with a vote dog...thanks. Stay up.
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