ill bing aka U.g vs caliph
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 04:30 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

ill bing aka U.G has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 04:11 AM.

look at this illeqquiped lil bitch nigga //pull out my mac 10 and pull the trigga// yo you mess with the rong mc at the rong site you grab mic like its the end of ya life and start to fight all i do is drop a versous about my life thats how ill the bing could be you seeing to many fake homie to get with u.gyou lucky i'am tierd cuss if i was ealy aweke you would be the next u.g admire'r

caliph has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 04:17 AM.

his bars weak he bout cold as a freezer
he'll always be beneath me
like the sole of my sneaker you cant reach um
im elevated and waiting
he ILL so just watch as i medicate him

upping for some honest votes a fair vote will get a fair vote back so be honest

Voted For: caliph

I'm a have to vote for caliph, reason being.....Ill bing's strucutre was horrible, and his lines were scretched, flow was off, he had a few decent punches but not enuff to win
Flow: 4/10
Structure: 3/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals: 2/10
Metas: 3/10
Overall: 16/50

Caliph....had good flow, structure was good, a few punches that hit hard enuff to get him win, and he didn't brag like ill bing did, so I think he pulled it out based on that.
Flow: 6/10
Structure: 6/10
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 4/10
Metas: 4/10
Overall:27/50

Aye could y'all holla back wit a honest well explained vote on my shit, I'd really appreciate dat
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1451408

This was feedback posted for caliph
 

I'm jus dropping feedback but i think both verses need work on them...Caliph u need to extend ur vocab um & him u need to perhaps develop on ur punches personals metas multies blah blah all in all it wasnt good to read.

Neither was ills the structure needs serious attention the /// is newbish so get rid...you need just as much work unfortunately which is why im not voting...was not impressed

that is so childish i just said that to him in his battle with mtw

uppin for votes give us some honest votes and we always do the same

Voted For: caliph

Ythis was a weak battle. caliphs was crap but it was better than what Ill bing put up i could barely read it vote goes to caliph for structure and flow and better lines yo return the favor by voting on my battles me vs. wordman

here is the link to the battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138434

uppin for some honest votes and explain why you voted in whatever way you voted

Voted For: caliph

HIS BARS COULD SNAP LIKE A TWIG YO AND CHECK MY BATTLE WID HIM ASWELL PEACE YO YOU HAD BETTER PUNCH LINES AND BETTER LINES AL TOGHETER

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