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original diss
yo man the niggas who diss me
yo im ready mutha list me jus to let ya know girls do kiss me unlike you men dont kiss me. whooo yo i try to ignore those behind me i follow my destiny blindly i'll kill them red handed my ground i standed if you turn yo back yo defenseless nigga thats senseless take a good guess relentless you bitch ass nigga what |
yo man this is short so dont hate telll me what you think of my lunch time battle
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yes short pretty good though keep doin ya thing nigga B.A.M 4 life
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yeah and you do good too B.A.M definitly fo life
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it was good..
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did this during lunch you said???i thought it was ok,structures short,write more ya'll get more feedback ruff........pc.
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ok hmmmmmmmmmmmm..................... I say you should add more words in each line because theres no room for a punch or anything to expect from it naw mean????? |
short an ta the point. keep choppin niggas down bra ~one~
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thanx ya'll uppin fo mo votes and thanx forsaken and you konw im on yo side
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I stress in speech but I’m bless to teach rap
Time to take or receive props, with fist reach for dap Accept the gift then step to uplift cats in the atmosphere In rap few attraction that bring true satisfaction it appear Must acknowledge the whack garbage that hit brains And cause legit pain now frighten dreams, fighting extreme remains Rhyme is a true bazaar like the design on a new car |
thanx to all uppin fo mo feedback
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