BrOTheRP.A.R.A. vs {D.N.A.}
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
first to 5 votes
3-0 ko
4-1 tko

May the best Emcee win...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 08:00 AM

Must drop verse in 1000 minutes after check in.

{D.N.A.} has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:21 PM.

ayo

Ya 0-2 only Thing you {Hittin} right now iz a Losin Streak/
you a Confusin Freak, Acceptin this Challenge iz just goin to Abuse ya Week/
I Choose to beat weak emcees and leave ya Brain in Stall/
Ya Interest is Gurls but they seem not to have The same at All/

{THE DNA CHANGEZ}

Da Nuerological Analysis Compliez that your brain is Functionin wit A Sort Of Glitch/
You betta Abort the Lipz, I would {Pay}ve the Way and you still couldnt Afford It Bitch/
You want it Quick, Put {Mascara} on ya {Forehead} so you can {Make up} ya {Mind}/
Its not a Mistake of Time, My flowz are Verbal you Just cant Relate To Mine/
Ill {Degrate ya Spine}, And i {Wood}nt hold nothin {Back} until Choose to Break tha {Pine}/

gotta go but g'lluck to ya..

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 06:35 PM.

im dreamin about my gurl//
i see her screamin cuz shes gonna get rapped by the devil//.

the next day i saw her she was fine as could be//
i looked at her she smiled back at me//.

2 days later everything was fine tell today//
i went to her house and told her everythings gonna be okay//.

i see her the next day at her house//
she told me she seen a mouse//.

if i only new i would tell her every things okay//
im not gonna say anything that would rowen the day//.

votes holla anyone

Voted For: {D.N.A.}

ok 2 be honest i asn't realy feelin any of your verses at all :(
but DNA's verse was much better to me... that 1st line i still do not get... when i read it i thought dis was a topical battle about da devil or girs or sumtin like dat... but your flow was good tho....but it didnt make sense to ME... so don't report my vote..... and your struc. wouldve been good if u didnt have these things /// it messes i up and makes u lok herbish
but anyway my vote goes 2 DNA

vote/DNA return da favor if any of u r o cuz dats fucked if u dont return da favor yo....

Voted For: {D.N.A.}

DNA you ripped this cat...nice disses, flowed pretty well, you got this

Voted For: {D.N.A.}

give it 2 D.N.A
brothers flow was
real weak didn't rhyme
at first n didn't make a bit
of sense plus i liked D.N.A's
wordplay it was hittn'
v/D.N.A
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DON
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Voted For: BrOTheRP.A.R.A.

dna nice shit but im goin wit brother on dis 1 more flow

Voted For: BrOTheRP.A.R.A.

brother had some good punches here im voteing for him the other verse had to many stretched lines I was feeling brothers verse alot more. The battler performanc goes to brother for having decent structure nice punches so vote for him.

Voted For: {D.N.A.}

Brother you done this more like a topical and your first two lines didn't even rhyme.......D.N.A got this one easy...sick multies.......nice metas......punches were solid and a cuple good pesonals.....

Vote:D.N.A

Voted For: {D.N.A.}

this was a good battle, but i felt DNA alot more like he had better flow and punchs

brother: u gotta work on ur shyt a little more..the first line didn't even rhyme wit then secon?