BrOTheRP.A.R.A. vs Lil-trip
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 10:06 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 07:08 PM.

your car broke down in the middle of kno where//
its pretty scary you dont even kno that hes there//.

the devil might come and grab you in your sleep//
he'll come and make you piss in yer dream now thats a creep//.

i once knew a man that made a million a day//
he was a hard core nigga you might think he was gay//.

he try to kill some one he stab them tell he die's//
he woke up later in the middle of night staring into his eye's//.

it must be the devil makin him see himself cry//
if he only new that he lie//.

i wait tell he come to see my freind he remaind in his bed//
he got shot cuz he rapped a man there, he is lieing dead//.

Lil-trip has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 07:19 PM.

Nigga your like a Candle..One "Blow" your Diminished n Dismantled..
lol homie, wheres your sig you jus had makin known with "0 Wins" n more losses that you "Now-Know" how to "Battle" haha

Ima mix up Ludas Verse n call this cats verse "Track-A-Fool"
lol hes rippin off Ezee how can you be Hard n be "Straight-Outta-Saskatoon" lol

3 Syllables n Stars is all im givin this homie if he wants a real "Mic-To-Blow"
I sit on 22's N ride Suv's Past 92 You ride on Handicap-Tandem-Tricycles!

I aint sweatin over a bitch you girls come a Dime a Dozen
Only time you "Hard" n "Black" is when your cooked n a easy bake oven lol

Gimme a kid whos proven "It" n "Trip" will Prove why he should be "Grindin" wit Clipse
The way trip is leavin you dissed...on your tombstone under Beaten by a kid wit a "Gift" itll Read dis "Brother" was to "Dissed to Be missed"...

Holla...Lil-Trip

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ight homie,

You need to either pick up a typing cd rom to improve yo typin skills what you already got, or pick up some game n elevate n spit somethin...

10 Lines shouldnt take 20-30 Minutes regardless, of how "Low" the quality or content is, lets get it done on time or not at all, no hate..jus Limited patience..hurry up, peace

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ITs been a hour and a half, and no reply..n this should be DQ'd but you put a unlimited time limit pretty much, pretty lame n pretty pointless since you don get 2 hours to spit 10 lines, whatever, ima eat n hopefully after another hour your done, peace

i already did spit if you schroll up dumb ass like fuck!

Voted For: Lil-trip

your shit was tight............................................. ......................

ight...
 

uppin for votes, holla back with some honest votes n feedback...

Voted For: Lil-trip

diss was a weak battle
i give it 2 Lil-Trip cuz
his flow was way better
BrOthER wtf were u talkin bout
just weak
v/Lil-Trip
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This was feedback posted for BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
 

lil blow and tricycles dont rhyme and your struture was streched your punches were weak and you had no personals
para better flow and struture was good but what the fuck are you talking about??!!!that was wayyyyyyyyy off track of the battle and you had no punches or personals at all
vote -lil

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needin dis shit closed, get some votes, holla back young'ns peace

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uppin for some votes, holla back with some feedback n votes, peace

Voted For: Lil-trip

I couldn't tell if it was a topical battle or a regular one...
BrotherP- In a battle you need to diss the person you're rhyming against... you gotta get personal and it's gotta be some shyt that people know about to be effective. Again, you came with a simple verse and it wasn't even about him. It doesn't matter if you like the dude or not... in a battle it's all out war and you gotta make us believe that the other dude is straight shyt compared to you.

Lil trip... that first line had me confused as all hell... think you can stretch it any longer?

didn't like that Hard and Black line... filler material... other than that, you got at ya opponent and that's the point I was trying to make to BrotherP...

work on ya structure... ya punches were a lot better and so was your vocab. Brother P used a lot of one syllable endings. That's what I like to call nursery rhymes... cat/bat, fly/try... that shyt's boring to read.

v/lil trip
drop honest votes in my 2 battles please