schema vs ill bing aka U.G
 

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Check in by: 08-01-04 at 03:23 AM

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ill bing aka U.G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 02:54 AM.

schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 02:55 AM.

i'll seal your real death// with a utter slash breath//you be the past slash a memory //have you sayin nigga rember me//haven a temper with U.G// yall be k.i.l.l ...E.D//half the shit u spit is bite getin lowd// with me put you under a dark glowd //sorrunden by thousands of killer nights ready/// armed to fight //with out the mic //so look next time you take a shit //rember i'm the nigga that ripped it possable//

yo why you want it with me you need to step up ya game
you versus me makes about as much sense as ya name

i dont see why youre tryin to go here for
multiply your wins by a billion and id still have more*

lookin through ya raps i see nothin im respectin
he says hes from nowhere cause no city wants him reppin**

i dont know wheres ya rhyme wheres ya flow wheres ya punch
ya verse all over the place like tryin to walk a line drunk

told me he was good on im...what a stupid thing to lie 'bout
you had to spit eventually so you had to know i'd find out


*0 times a billion is 0
**in his profile his location says nowhere

any pne going to vote at all

Voted For: schema

ill bing aka U.G
structure is wack as fuck...dont write ur shit in paragraphs...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..

schema
structure is good...flow is on target...u had no multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...decent personal...

Overall
neither had multis...schema had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...schema gets my vote...

VOTE - SCHEMA

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Voted For: schema

ill bing aka you just arent that good this wasent to much of a battle shrema im not tell you that you suck but this battle sucked this time but yers was still beter then ill bing aka u.g ok!

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Voted For: schema

Schema had dis. Structure was way better and flow too. Wordplay was way better and punches hit harder....Over all every thing was good.Ill bing your stuff was aiight work on structure an wordplay. v schema.

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Voted For: schema

Schema takes this with punches that were hittin hard. Good personals too on the name and the profile on the side. Ills was kinda hard ta read cuz of the messed up structure. Didnt really see nuthin tite neither. Elevate. Schema gets the vote.

Vote-Schema

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Voted For: schema

yo dis goes to shema, close battle tho i dont evn no who 2 vote for but shema gets it heres y,


structure-shema
wordplay-lil bing
vocab-Shema
punches-tie
flo-Shema

good battle yall did yall thing

v/shema