my screwed up keystyle
 

here's just some shit to pass the time

my abilities are usual, but i rule at wordplays//
i would be a star years ago if Asians spread hearsays//
and if George Bush would just stop producing brainwaves//
then maybe aftermath would recieve more airplays//
hear me niggaz, i knew my rap style was twisted//
i flow faster than most pistons you not sure if you missed it//
nothing ain't too fancy, but nothing too defensive//
i stab at the most common parts of nerve-wreck depressions//
hear my whisper, i could just beat bitches silently//
and if niggaz tries to fuck with me, i shall react violently//
finally, am all-in-one nigga ready to play shit gangsta//
pop shit iller than most of them wall-street pimpstas//
sorry i missed ya, but i insist ya to bump into more tussles//
bitches with muscles, you attack their facial features with a waffle//
keep them muffled, and come up with the mocks worse then hogs//
"prostitute who sucks horses balls and fuck dead dogs"//

^^making absolutely no point in this verse

I'd like a response plz, just because some herb think it sucks doesn't mean i come back in a couple of days to find it all the way in page 5

beside, i'm a man who could always use some improvement, so i'd like some feed backsplz

not bad not bad at all

^^^speaks tha truth..............nuff said

not bad man i feel your pain no one replys back in mine either they just look and leave lol how rude anyways nice rhymes man

i dunno... i didn't like it but that's just my opinion. it seemed pretty played and basic but the flow was ok.

pretty good drop didnt get da las line though...
"keep them muffled, and come up with the mocks worse then hogs//
"prostitute who sucks horses balls and fuck dead dogs"//".....

otha than dat it was kool nice drop holla back nigga peace

i liked it, flo was koo but da ryms were a lil played but it was still koo man, nice piece dawg, keep postin

honored