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for$aken vs SONIC
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 75 Check in by: 08-01-04 at 09:52 PM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 09:23 PM.
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SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 09:24 PM.
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he changed his name to quickly prove his rhymes are fast...
but putting it to Sonic is the closest he can get to Dreamcast... can't see he's losing the battle because he's visually impaired... his rhymes aren't out of the box like a mime hes just "squared"... has to get dickriders to vote on his battles just like this... his rhymes are trapped in a bottomless pit like it was a abyss... he resulted in wanting "cats" for his own muhfuckin' pleasures... his lines aren't long at all probably like another place measures?... claiming he changed his name to Sonice because he runs though mc's... but whenever he battles how come his shit I can never ever see?... his garbage isn't allowed in rap i'm surprised he got a permit... this kids not good not even close to a vet he even admitted it... ^just like Usher this shit is bound to be his "Confessions"... he doesn't own nothing so how can this battle be in his possession?... *bar 4 explanation: in a thread he wanted LK I believe to suck his dick....* *bar 5 explanation: his name is SONIC and sonic is too fast see him get it?* *last bar explanation: possession means stuff you own.....* |
I guess you're next, I rosted Mc's and Iv'e Baked A Few
This'll be easy coz obviously the rhyme God has "For$aken U" From what Iv'e read from your lyrics, I know u won't Get Far Yo rhymes could be a 50 Ton Comets, They still won't Hit Hard You're Just Disgraceful, Plus, me burning u Must Be Painful If u Regurgitated Kool-aid, u still couldn't spit Nothin Tasteful Watch it bitch, yo whack juice is drippin on yo Key Board Wit yo whack style u'll never blow up, Like Disassembled C-4 You will be X'ed out, but no, You're Not Malcolm Coz u couldn't sell a record if it came wit a new Tupac Album I really have a whole lot of shit to Spit About You I rather snuff you for loose change and Beat the Sense out U (Cents) Let it Live, My Intelligence is too Excellent You try to keep up, but get left "in the dust", like Elements Accepting a challenge from me means that u Accept Defeat Coz U x 5 trillion still = ......Less Than Me I don't know nothin About You, but with those skills, I Doubt U If say that Rap is "In U", I came to take everthing Out U This is not the way u play, U Lost the Race What you spit is "Garbage", like you drink Toxic Waist We can even battle in a ring, so ya'll can see Who's the MC He Can Even spit a Canibus verse, he'll still Lose Against Me I can rip mic any where, Spittin Lound and So Sick On stage, If the crowd was on Trampolines instead of Chairs, they still wouldn't Bounce to yo Shit |
damn, i didn't have time to preview and edit my shit..
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Voted For: For$akeN
Forsaken- Structure Was Good, Flow Was On Point, Personals Were Good, And Had Some Ok Wordplay Spnic- Punches Were Better, But Structure Wasnt, You Had Some Decent Metas, And Flow Was Good Punches- Sonic Personals- Forsaken Flow- Tie Wordplay- Forsaken Metas- Sonic Structure- Forsaken Originality- Sonic Multis- Niether Final Vote- Forsaken Good Battle.. But Forsaken Gets My Vote |
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Voted For: SONIC
Vote Sonic I got to go with sonic on this one Hard battle to judge but here goes SONIC better flow, better wordplay , better punches and overall better battle verse.... Forsaken your shit would have been hot back in like 2000 |
^2000????? you crazy mayn.............. |
^to Be Real.. I Kinda Agree.... Especially When I Read The 2nd To The Last Bar Where You Rhymed "permit", With "admitted It".. I Was Like Noooo...
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This was feedback posted for SONIC
This was goes to sonic for all kinds of reasons: better structure, better flow, better punches (i like that snuff you for loose change line... shyt was funny), and the rhyme overall made a lot more sense. The only thing it seemed to really lack was personals. the structure could be cleaned up a bit but it was ok... enough to get the win. also he needs to step his vocab up a little... try using some multi's. they're not necessary but they add more fuel to the fire... especially in text when it flows well.
Forsaken came with a premature style that probably wouldn't have hit on this site 5 years ago. It wasn't a terrible verse but it's far from being on point. he had some pretty good ideas but he just needed to put them together better. Again, vocab needs work. there were no multi's or real word play. step ya game up playa... you're not too far behind him... and work on that structure. |
i tried to vote but it said i needed 75 posts... only got 36 now... sorry guys...Forsaken, ya still in the race.
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