Word processor vs intensify effect
 

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Check in by: 08-04-04 at 01:28 AM

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Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 01:29 AM.

guess i'll just do this right quick
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im tired of kids like you talkin lika menace
watch your sweettalk because i check mouths lika dentist
please believe i disconnect emmcees from tha matrix
after i rob you'll be so broke you'll need a fix
your flow is garbage and has no purpose
like tha president dying for tha secret service
your worthless and you flow lika constipated ass
i flow like Od'ed on ex-lax that shit drops fast
closer-
your easily cooked like boiling water
your record is lopsided like a teter toter

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 12:02 AM.

u aint fucking with me even if ya verse was to snuggle up
cuz this win 4 me is safe like a buckle up

chuckle up, cuz thats what happen when peep view ya verse
we would understand if u no-show cuz ya skill would make ya look worse

till how u want this loss with creative punches
or just one shot that'll have u on ya back like crunches

2-3, thats weak but between u and me
understand beating me would take 2 of me

truly see there aint no strain in my verse
cuz im soon gonna carry this W up like a hurse

bitch, bang bang....

dished out in 6 min.....

ooo-shit i thought u was gonna no-show so i ass'ed my verse.....

can i drop a quick verse in 5 min???
to replace this which i bull-shited since i thought u was gonna no-show???

dag...

Voted For: intensify effect

hmm.i personally liked this verse better i found the punches connected solidly..flow was ok vocab was decent..nothin 2 special but it was all the punches..nice wording in your verse i think thats what made your punches more efective..
hit this up:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139217

upp'in i guess,
with my half-ass verse...........

Voted For: intensify effect

Word Proc- Flow Was Good, Punchs Were Eh, Some Wordplay Concepts Played

Inten- Ok Had Some Metas, Flow Was Ok... Struc As Good, nd Punces Were Ok...

Punches- Tie
Flow- Word
Metaphors- Inten
Wordplay-Tie
Structure- Inten
Originality- Tie
Multis- Niether

Final Vote- Intensify Effect

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
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upp"in this battle............
long ova due already.........

upp"in this battle............
long ova due already.........

vote.....

drop link.......

N i'll return the favor of a vote.......

Voted For: Word processor

My vote goes to Word Processor

I think that Intensifys verse lack imagination and Words verse had better word play and intensify. Also nothin about intensifys verse really stood out to me, not that it was a bad verse, its just nothing came at me like... WOW that shit was good. and to be honest neither did word but he did have better planned punches and a better planned verse in my eyes so for those reasons my vote goes to Word Processor


and can you return the favour (Intensify) wiv my battle against Word Processor....

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304

what^^? lame cats.....

upp'in this battle......

Voted For: intensify effect

ok:
intensify effect:i liked the flow of ya verse, the continued rhyme scheme from the first lines of your verse to the second bar, nice punches and you never fell off, good job, ya closer was good too,
word: your flow was ok, but kinda fell of a bit towards the end, tho i liked your punches too, good job overall
vote:intensify for punches and flow