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BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-02-04 06:24 PM

Crazy Cree please send feedback?
 
Crazy cree is a indian gang in my town ok so here it is this one kinda sucks i think but idk i need some good people to vote on this i need to kno if im good and this happened 3 days ago a g-bag is an osiris back pack with speakers you can listento beatz off it but i dont wear skate clothes any more its all b-ball well here it is:

in the city i live in we have a gang called the crazy cree/
full of indains that think there gangsta sometimes i wonder what they try to be/.

one day i walk past some indains that tryed to rob me/
cuz i was wearin red and they said what crew ya i said none and told them 2 flee/.

that day i was with my freinds i was carrying my g-bag/
one of them were fat that had boobs that shag/
i dont brag so dont call me a fag or i will get mad and go rank/
or i will pull a prank and bust a black in your ass/.

i wanna move from this place cause i see/
to much indain, one day ill bring a gun with me and count to three/
and shoot them up then i will be free/.

raw killa 08-02-04 06:52 PM

its a good yet simple piece again...
sounds like a 5 grader wrote dat...
boost ur vocab n all n ull do good...
keep postin n return da favor...
check da thread's...:
troubled minds posted by ruff tuff thug(crew song)n my life posted by same person (crewsong 2)


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