The Devil uppin for feedback?
 

here this songs is i made it a few days ago its just a story i made up so here it is:

i once knew a man named william he made a million a day//
he was a hard core wigga you might think he was gay//.

his car broke down in the middle of kno where//
its pretty scary you dont even kno that hes there//.

the devil might come and grab you in your sleep//
he'll come and make you piss in yer dream now thats a creep//.

he tryed to kill him he stab him tell he'd die//
he woke up later in the middle of night staring right into his eye//.

it must be the devil showin him that he cryed//
if he only new that he lied//.

i cant wait tell he come to see my freind that remaind in his bed//
he got caught by the devil cuz he rape'd a man there, he is lieing dead//.

uh 1 question get out da way ur not gay plz?u have enough fags on dis site..lmmao
n e ways no beef jus jokes.nice drop but way simplework on vocaulary n lil longer.
but doin u cuz peep thread troubled minds posted by ruff tuff thug its a crew song we did holla back peace out 1 love