Middleweight Contendership Match- Com(2-0) vs. Raw material(2-0)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
20line max.
REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

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-CJ-

I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles,
We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles.
But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try,
Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die,
This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs,
And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com. :shoot:
With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile,
I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child.
You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten,
Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten.

This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth
Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf
Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended
You put your life into this battle
.................................. so its only fitting you should end it
Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet
I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal
Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal
Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow
Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole

and that is a sonning.. like i had to try.

I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles,
We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles.
decent opener
But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try,
Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die,
ahh just okay
This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs,
And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com.
nice personal
With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile,
I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child.
not good
You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten,
Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten.
not a good closer






This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth
Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf
not good
Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended
You put your life into this battle
.................................. so its only fitting you should end it
nice punch

Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet
decent
I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal
Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal
okay
Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow
Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole
not good

close batte, i give this one to raw material based on better punches and personals. not your best stuff RM, com your verse was decent but not enough personals.

vote- raw material

Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet
I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal
Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal
Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow
Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole

^that won it 4 me.

Vote Com

so his ONE personal.. (which wasnt a personal anyway.. it was a nameplay) won the battle for him??? jesus christ.. kids these days....

Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet

niiiiiice

v) COM

FIRST OF ALL CJ HAD A BETTER OVERALL VERSE, YOUR PUNCHES WERE PLAYED INCLUDING YOUR CLOSER. NO HATE MY OPINION, PEACE.

aight i liked com ender better then raws and his flow was better ,he had a few aight punhces but none that impressed me.raw your flow was hard to follow but you had a fire personal in the second bar a good ender and alot of good disses and thats what won this for you.
vote-raw material

fuck this shit.... sign me out... the voters on here don't know a good line from a wack one so whats the point?? his verse was pure garbage... his punches were basic played and mostly pointless... this site is FULL of newbies.. and how can people who cant write a decent verses themselves be expected to vote on these battles?.... fuck it.. i'm out.. pz

Come had better punches and a better flow


This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth
Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf
Nice 1 7/10!!
Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended
You put your life into this battle
.................................. so its only fitting you should end it
Good 6/10!!
Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet
Hot Shit 7/10!!
I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal
Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal
Allright 5/10!!
Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow
Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole
Nice Finisher 8/10!!

33/50


Raw Meterial nice personals but that dont just cut it


I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles,
We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles.
Good But Strechted all lines Strechted 7/10
But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try,
Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die,
Weak 5/10
This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs,
And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com.
Weak 5/10
With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile,
I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child.
Good shit 6/10!!
You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten,
Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten.
Good Finisher 6/10!!

29/50

V/CoM

Raw Material- Flow Was Good, Punches Were Decent, And Wordplay Was Ok...Personal Was Good But Just 1 Or 2 That I Know Are Real (Dunno Bout Melested) And Red Dot Com Was Decent

Com- Flow Was Good, Punches Were Good, Ass' Line Was Good, Metaphors Decent.... Overal Good Verse

Punches- Com
Personals- Raw
Flow-Tie
Wordplay- Raw
Metaphors- Com
Structure- Tie
Originality- Com

Final Vote---- Com

COM

This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth
Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf
Not feeling it...
Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended
You put your life into this battle
.................................. so its only fitting you should end it
Decent
Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet
Liked this.
I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal
Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal
Ok but weak
Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow
Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole
Nice


Raw Material

I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles,
We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles.
Decent.
But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try,
Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die,
nah
This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs,
And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com.
Not feeling it. Weak.
With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile,
I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child.
Not feeling it but was okay I guess.
You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten,
Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten.
meh.

Vote - COM. Feeling his verse more, harder punches.