My Raps!!
 

My Game:

I got the flow
Even when I’m gonna blow
I got the style
Through 1,000 miles
A lot of people call me names
But they wont be when I get the fame
Ya wanna be part of the game
The way ya can be part of the game is to beat me
The way to beat me is to treat me
The only way to treat me is to meet me!
No one can beat me
I’m the best there can be
A lot of guys say they like the way I move
But a lot of them I wouldn’t chose
But then a lot of guys see me as a whore
They usually say “Look at that whore at the door”

Gangsta Girl:

Gangsta Girl that’s my name
Man I aint fuckin playin
I know ya’ll want ta be like me but ya aint taken my game
I am the P.I.M.P of my generation
I got a lot of frustration
I can rap and more
But I aint gonna be your little whore
Rap is my life
I am gonna be a gangsta wife
I want someone to support me
Physically and mentally
A lot of guys think I trust them enough to tell them my dreams
And a lot of then wonder how I get in my jeans
I got a ghetto or gangsta style
People will recognize me through 1,000 miles


I have others I'll post them later!!

Hey its aight but you don't need "I got a ghetto OR gangsta style." You don't need the 'OR' in between...What is that?!

Hey!! I am new ta this!! But I got other ones that are better!! I am gonna post them later!!

nice shit babygurl...keep droppin...you gotta work on that structure tho...aight gurl holla back at me ~1~

yeh this was nice but let me drop this right here

Look I’m into this bling thing so I see ices with devices
That shines like the sun funny how they design some, a cri-sis
If a thug lose his jewels like JAROO did, feel small like mice is
See mean between lines and spit obscene rhymes for the public
Like candidates in debates over economy but politics is the subject
Got a love it being a thug legit
On my status the crowd stay at us need apparatus such as
Microphones and CD’S, in towns Roams as VIP’S playing jazz
Be strong in flow and ski on snow like the ice capade in
A nice parade during the Olympic wants the gold when I win

^^^what are ya doing..lol...sexychick try ta use larger vocab n if your new check out the tutorials if ya seriously wanna get better at this...your drop was pretty simple but it was'nt terrible just try n get better every day...

nice but like it was said simple drop dont mind my stats niggaz kno im nice jus got sum fuckin hataz nah mean but n e way up ur vocab n dont go round tlkn like u can beat n e in battle cuz u will b served cuz niggaz n niggets here hate newbies tlkn big look at me yet i didnt have 2 try out 4 a crew they asked me after my first few drops...lol...n e ways good drop mami keep doin u holla back n return da favor

No hate but its bit basic, u got skillz tho, u just spittin straight from ya soul (always kool) but just try to get some more structure and get ya vocab going, then u gonna be dope, gurl...keep doing ya thing!

Here are some of my otha rhymes:

Life!!

Talking: Ya never cared about me, all ya cared about was you and only. Ya left me hangin when i needed ya most! Well, I don't need you!!

Ya never cared about me
Ya just let me be
I need a man who is there for me and who cares for me
Well that's not you at all
You just like to go out partying and havin a ball
Ya called me names like a hoe and a whore
If ya thought that then why did ya date me for?
I aint gonna cry over you
I wanted to commit sucide, I bet ya had no clue
I know you, you didn't give a fuck
Ya probably dated a girl for a buck
You were always on my mind
I always questioned if ya were cheatin and why
Ya said that ya wanted to marry me and ya wanted me to have your kids
I think ya changed ya mind because of my fits
There all lies
Now is my chance to say good-bye!!


Sexy Chick:

Guys like my sexy style
Mostly when I'm gettin wild
I should be in a magizine
Becuase I am the ghetto queen
I like to shake my thing round and round
Guys like it when I put it down
I got the pretty ice and cash
Also I got the pretty ass
I got the sexy hips
And the sexy lips
I'm tired of guys usin lines on this sexy Chick
I wanna do more than see a flick
Most people just see me as a hottie
Wit a body!

So tell me what ya'll think!!

there all basic really you need ta try n get more complex...go check the tutorials they'll help you alot...

^^tru... thats all i can say

like: i "ate" a "rat"
this is no "debate" cause i pack a "gat"

Ma, you seem to be stuck on the self-glorification tip, but other than that your shit was straight. You gotta work on your structure too, but you'll get better with practice. I understand you're new to this, so just keep at it. Check out some of my posts and let me know what you think.
Admiration
Inevitable
Redemption
Thanks, 'preciate it.

Pending Battles:
Drop an honest vote. Gimme a link and I'll return the favor.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139283

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138907

that was pretty decent just use more complex vocab.nice spit tho.

All I can say is nice drop and keep on going towards being all you can be,,,
Gob bless all,,
Oh yea one more thing,,I told yall I had something for them haters and here it is.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140326