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ATMOSPHERE vs 7*0*8*
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give 100 dollars if battle is lost 15 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting im bout 2 go so i'll spit tommorow iight? Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 08-05-04 at 02:47 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
ATMOSPHERE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 02:48 PM.
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7*0*8* has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 03:58 PM.
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topic:
~i feel i shoulda made the lines shorter~in this case ~all these rhymes and i only get a win~ what a waste ~and i feel i shoulda chaged the topic~its too narrow ~its way 2 specific i gotta be on point~ like a arrow ~ and i feel like goin 2 sleep ~ but i jus wanna be known ~ cuz niggas want u 2 be deep: so i dig hard 2 da bone... ~in my brain, and get my deepest thoughts~ and mainframe ~ so i can neva let my rap go 2 a halt~so i can stay sane ~i feel like one day i'll be respected~ but i dont expect it ~cuz i feel when u know the future~it gets effected ~i feel crowded in here~ its alotta niggas 2 burn ~but I aint here 4 cheer~ 2 be real im mostly here 2 learn ~ cuz whats da point ~of talkin shit like howard stern ~ if ya stuck a home~ waterin ya mommas ferns (flowers) ~damn nigga I grown~ but still yo sake aint my concern |
Topic: wut your feeling right now Battlin another bitch?im too tired, your a waste of my time... It's 1:58 am and on u im jst waste'n a few of mah rhymes... I wanna sleep, but dis piece is freaken due in 9 hours... Shyt, i forgot to take a shower, i'll do it after i kill dis coward... I've been on dis computer since it was only around 8.... ha, shyt i need a life, no wonder my freaken back aches... My arms are sore, n feels like i need to rest only one eye... Damn! I forgot!!I jst realized that i got work at exactly nine... I only need a couple more lines, but don't know wut to put... My head i jst shook, this whole verse 30 min of writtin it took... Damn, i need to take mah breathe n feels like mah mind needs rest... Feels like beatin dis nigga is as easy as passin the hearin exam test... Im thinkin, wow, im battliin 7*0*8, ha it must be a honor... But if u think ur hella good, why did u only bet 100 dollars???... Im feelin is dis whole verse long enough?as in right now i don't care... WTH!! I don't care if i loose, i got thousands of more money to spare... Yes dis all true, dis is wut i feel, my eyes feel like they almost shut... 32140 is mah account number, cuz 100 dollars u better start coughin up... |
Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
vocab both were decent personals none really cause its a topical lol 708 ur verse was straigt but i think ats was better i felt he stayed on topic a little better u know both had really good verses thoguh no hate but htats my vote |
Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
yea, I think Atmosphere got this. 708, yo this was aiight. But yo lines were all off flow. No hate, but those little squiggly lines fuck up yo flow. But it was pretty decent not that bad. At, this was pretty good. Nice flow throughtout yo verse. I liked it, and it had nice vocab too. PRetty good job on this, man. Not too bad. Overall, you had a better verse. V/At no hate |
coo...uppin for more votes.
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uupin
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
your peice was nice..good flow and what not..but it didnt seem like a topical it seemed like you were trying to diss on 708 to much..bu you stayed on topic fairly well...all around nice peice..overall 7.6/10 |
lol...yea...but that was how i was feelin....lol..thanx for da vote
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
YO I GIVE THIS TO ATMOSPHERE BECAUSE HE WAS MORE ON TOPIC AND HE ACTUALLY HAD A TOPIC,HAD THE RIGHT EMOTION FOR THIS PIECE ALSO SHIT WAS PRETTY CLEAN MAN WELL WORDED, 708 U DIDNT DO BAD BUT U LACKED IMAGERY AND ALL,THE EMOTION WAS SOME WHAT THERE,BUT OVERALL I WASNT FEELIN UR VERSE V/ATMOSPHERE |
atmosphere killed on this shit.......... but spread the love people on my battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...465978&posted=1 |
uppin..jst one more vote
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upin
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