hotshh! vs Lekchur
 

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8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate/DR
Voters must do breakdown

Minimum posts to vote: 40

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 05:06 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Lekchur has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 04:39 PM.

hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 04:41 PM.

Ya Team Is Slaughtered, 'Wash This Girl' Off The Board Like 'Cleanin Daughters'
So Everyone Watch Me 'Drop Hot' Like A 'Pot' Of 'Steamin Water'!
My Dreamins Hotter, Than You, This Fool I'll Bury Em
Since The Only People 'Feelin Shh'! Are 'School Librarians'!
The Tool Barbarian, I Spit Flows And Send Handy Clips
And Lekchur Finna 'Cut Ya Assistance' Quicker Than 'Andy Dick'!
You Candy Prick, I'll Knock Ya Kin And Shock Ya Chin!
Then Take The 'O Out Ya Name' Cuz 'HT' Lek 'Ought To Win''!
I'll Stop Ya Sins, It's Like 'Ham' When I Start 'Glazin This Man'
Hot, People Wouldnt 'Call On You' In Rap If You Were 'Raisin Ya Hand'!

Lekchur Who?? Ya 1st verse'll be Dodi, Caca*
Ya crew be like dude get a clue he gotcha
Cause ya punches dont connect like woozy boxers
But its no Difference.U couldnt come close if we was Neighbors
Watch Me rip Lek like pregnant vagina during labor
But ima hater so im coming hard like this bitch* is off the meter
Ill slap lekchur out his coma to bring em into seizures
Ill let u live just so ill can kill you tonite
And by day 2 youll neva make it back to this site
He dont know he gonna lose so ima give em the shoe
Cause he only logged on thinking this was Rhythm and Blues!*


Dodi, Caca spanish for shit
this used to be RB Rap Battles (Rhythm And Blues RB) get it
Bitch in the form of having a pussy

good shit
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Voted For: Lekchur

Lek took this.. Hotshh, yo verse was real coo towards the end, then you had some filller in there.. Lek had better Multies, Structure was good from both of you.. Lek's Flow was better, Lek had harder Punches, and a better Closer.. So this is why you get my Vote..

Can you return favor wit a drop in my battle? thanx
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139363

Voted For: hotshh!

HOTSHH!GOT THIS HE HAD BETTER PUNCHES N MORE OF 'EM.
LEKCHUR NEEDS TO GET HIS CREATIVITY UP N HE HAS THA BEGGINING OF A FLOW

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Voted For: Lekchur

Lek gets it for stronger punches. I got dat RB thing Hot it was good I liked it. I felt Lek had more consistency it was close tho'. return da fav. help me close this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

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Voted For: Lekchur

Lekchure:
Ya Team Is Slaughtered, 'Wash This Girl' Off The Board Like 'Cleanin Daughters'
So Everyone Watch Me 'Drop Hot' Like A 'Pot' Of 'Steamin Water'! ok opener...5/10

My Dreamins Hotter, Than You, This Fool I'll Bury Em
Since The Only People 'Feelin Shh'! Are 'School Librarians'!
creative...7/10

The Tool Barbarian, I Spit Flows And Send Handy Clips
And Lekchur Finna 'Cut Ya Assistance' Quicker Than 'Andy Dick'! nice multis...6.5/10

You Candy Prick, I'll Knock Ya Kin And Shock Ya Chin!
Then Take The 'O Out Ya Name' Cuz 'HT' Lek 'Ought To Win''!
4/10

I'll Stop Ya Sins, It's Like 'Ham' When I Start 'Glazin This Man'
Hot, People Wouldnt 'Call On You' In Rap If You Were 'Raisin Ya Hand'! nice closer.... 7/10

29.5/50....u had some good multi's verse was ok punches could have hit harder...

Hotshh!:

Lekchur Who?? Ya 1st verse'll be Dodi, Caca*
Ya crew be like dude get a clue he gotcha
Cause ya punches dont connect like woozy boxers

not bad could have kept that extra line tho...6/10

But its no Difference.U couldnt come close if we was Neighbors
Watch Me rip Lek like pregnant vagina during labor
weak punch...4/10

But ima hater so im coming hard like this bitch* is off the meter
Ill slap lekchur out his coma to bring em into seizures
kinda weak...4/10

Ill let u live just so ill can kill you tonite
And by day 2 youll neva make it back to this site
kinda weak again...3/10

He dont know he gonna lose so ima give em the shoe
Cause he only logged on thinking this was Rhythm and Blues!*
ok closer...4.5/10

21.5/50.... didn't really have any strong punches, structure was off with some short lines and some long ones. Flow got thrown off with that extra line in the beginning. not bad though

Vote Lekchur

Voted For: Lekchur

lekchur won cause of Wordplay and Personals
hotshh u lack wordplay punches personals structure reglaur but all that u lack practice and u cant beat him

Lekchur

Flow 5/10
Punches 7/10
Rhymez 7/10
Structure 5/10
27/40

hotshh!

Flow 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 6/10
Rhymez 6/10
23/40

V/Lek

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