U think u kno?!
 

Im a black man wit a purpose, not a dream or a goal
u think u kno how 2 raise a troubled 15 yr old

ppl alwayz wonder what i can achieve in life
u think u kno how 2 tell someone wrong from right

raised in tha projects, a young nigga 2 some
u think u kno what itz like 2 be a fatherless son

tryin 2 find a positive road and never look back
u think u kno what is fiction and what is fact

dont get it twisted this life of mine i'll alwayz remember
u think u kno what itz like 2 get no presents on december

I kno what itz like cuz i use 2 live that life
i dont have 2 fight anymore, i kno whatz right

yo this was nice and deep but yo this is poems not rap change yo structure

i'll keep that in mind next time. thanx

short scheme

simple but it gets a point across

use stronger words for shorter poems with less description like urs is

but other than that thats pretty good...i liked it

by tha way u should go return tha favor and drop somefeedback 4 my tow poems:

"your pain is my pain" and "turn for tha worse"