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Just somethin i thru together
give me a lil feed back
In these streets it’s hard to realize/ Looking thru distant eyes/ Cause genocide is why our mothers cry/ Brothas die but the street remains/ 600 yrs of a slain slave/ It seems we aint capable to break the chain/ The face of the new generation won’t change/ When hatred is wealth/ An the night hides the stealth/ Look at what the hands of fate dealt/ Now going to jail makes you a man now/ See how it sounds simply unrashinel/ That’s why my mic is a hand held/ Project-in intellectual shrapnel/ To help brothas mix colors/ But how can we be one/ When the nature of man is to hate any one/ It seems we will never be at peace/ When half of you think you really free/ Cut off and numb wish-in for freedom/ But every day you prove you freely dumb/ Saving nations who worship which one/ If you looked at the sky/ Wont you'll see the same sun/ The same air to breathe/ Identical fish in the sea/ If you pricked a thousand emcees/ I guarantee each one would bleed. |
Kid everything about that was dope! Structure, Flow, Messsage, Wordplay: Real Hip Hop! I definitely could appreciate it! keep building!
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yo thanx Barz uppin for more feed back ppl
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