DustyBlunted vs J_Trooper
 

Battle Rules:
10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

30 minz 2 drop

Minimum posts to vote: 75

Check in by: 08-04-04 at 10:16 PM

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DustyBlunted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 09:49 PM.

Dusty Blunted the lyrical phenomenon,Im about to fuck this cat up worse than hallucinogenics dispersed in Viet Nam, You packin’ a pistol? Well Im packin’ a bomb…
Get your whole crew torn down in a week like you were Saddam….
Im so dope you can see me is when I reflect at night when the ocean’s clam…(Like a Star)
Only time you get any play is with your fingers and your palm..
Because you’re a pervert jerkin off to porn of me and your mom….
Your 14 and 1 but your soon to be 14 and 2…
Nice picture on your signature….I remember that…That’s me knockin’ the fuck outta you…
You vocab needs to check into your local illiteracy rehab…..
Your whole crew more “Yellow” than a taxi cab…..

J_Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 09:51 PM.

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Voted For: J_Trooper

Vote J troop
Better flow , wordplay , punches and his punches hit harder,

Crusty Blunt or who ever needs up his vocab and flow a lil, he has some skills , but not good enought here

Voted For: J_Trooper

ok this was a decent battle.
flow :tie, cause both you cause didnt have a consistent flow
punches :tie cause both ya punches was light like j wayne gretsky line was played, jordan line played but dusty's "bomb and saddam line was supa played both predictable and simple
personals: tie cause j didnt have none but dustys was so wack it doesnt count
fuck it, overal enjoyability: j because its always interesting to see how a nigga with such a good rec flow
well today this one wasnt so good but neither was dustys
both ya need to elevate

Voted For: J_Trooper

Stucture - J Trooper
fow - J Trooper
Wordplay - J - Trooper
Punches - J Trooper
Personals - Neither
Operner- J - Trooper
Closer - J - Trooper

Basically J Trooper took this in all aspects.. His stucture was on point, which made it flow good too.. you had a couple of multies in there, the punches were better than his also.. opener and closer was stronger so I vote for you J trooper..

Return favor wit an honest drop in mines please, thanx..

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Voted For: J_Trooper

this was a tough battle ta judge so im jus gonna break it down:
j-trooper

Now you Overbearin My Lyrix~ ~i dont think your hearin This?
You wouldnt be Hard if u had help from Pornographic Stimulants
^^good opener..6/10 pushin the rhyme
it's Not in your Heritage for you 2 Be Respected,U kno This
Go thru u quicker than the Ring Transitions on Jennifer Lopez
^^ok..5/10
Im testin your Durability,U aint Ranked enough 2 Stand near Me
Fuck Canadians i Deliver "Backshots" Harder than wayne Gretsky
^^"backshots"did'nt like this thought it was lame 4/10
Consider Rejection its ya only Option, Ya rights i fuckin Own
Can tell your Artificial like ya lyrix were enjected wit Sillicone
^^o.k punch..badly worded..5/10
Understand your Battelin one Of Lyrical Viruses Leathal Tyrants
Your spitting is~~ Inconsistent like Michael Jordan Retirements
^^not a bad closer..lacked of punch though..6/10

overall did'nt really feel much in terms of punches from ya verse j,i've seen you produce much better stuff than this..
it was pretty weak..26/50

dustyblunt...
Dusty Blunted the lyrical phenomenon,Im about to fuck this cat up worse than hallucinogenics dispersed in Viet Nam,
^^stretch unequal lines..4/10
You packin’ a pistol? Well Im packin’ a bomb…
Get your whole crew torn down in a week like you were Saddam….
^^no punch filler..4/10
Im so dope you can see me is when I reflect at night when the ocean’s clam…(Like a Star)
Only time you get any play is with your fingers and your palm..
Because you’re a pervert jerkin off to porn of me and your mom….
^^bar wit 3 lines..nono wack..6/10
Your 14 and 1 but your soon to be 14 and 2…
Nice picture on your signature….I remember that…That’s me knockin’ the fuck outta you…
^^nice idea..ya ruined ity with ya 1st line..4/10
You vocab needs to check into your local illiteracy rehab…..
Your whole crew more “Yellow” than a taxi cab…..
ya battlin him,not the crew..weak punch..n closer..5/10
overall 23/50
overall your rhymin scheme was better but you structure plain sucked,keep elevatin.....
im gonna have ta go with j on this battle^^this explains it..
but this battle was'nt very good..no hate its jus my opinion..

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